Reviews for In Honor of our Children

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Shinigami-Deathgate 2008-07-08 ch 7,	abuseOMG I loved this story ever since I was little. I found this on another site and just my luck it was here. Thank you for writing this! It really made me feel better inside I pictured it all in my mind as I read this..I really liked Adrian and I really liked the hope for the future fiasco for Squall and Rinoa You did a great job
Magus Sister Mandy 2006-12-28 ch 7,	abusenice! :)
Piyo Piyo x3 2006-02-13 ch 7, anon.	abuseI'm just in a state of shock right now... I can't believe that this fanfic, only 7 chapters.. well 37.. covered so much. I was actually crying when Adrian died (even though I already knew because I looked at the reviews). You captured everyone's emotions so well in this, at times I felt that I wanted to strangle Squall for his actions, or that maybe I was crying for him too, even more so than in the game. At least he did the right thing and quit in the end. I used to be unable to picture Squall and the others leaving Garden and SeeD.. but you've changed my mind on that. I couldn't help but smile near the end with Dawn and Laguna.. the whole thing ended on a rather sad note with the gunblade though. Well, thanks for writing this, it was truly touching to read. :)
Jayliyah 2005-10-29 ch 7,	abuseIt started out great.. but the last few chapters were so tragic.. I can't believe little Adrian had to go. sniffs I think you did wonderfully with the characterization, especially Squall's. It seemed realistic to me and I appreciate it more. I probably won't forget this story for a while.. I liked it a lot.
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2004-08-14 ch 7,	abuseOMG, how totally sweet! Oh, I wanna read the sequel so bad now, it hurts! (I already read it, but hey, for old times' sake!)
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2004-08-14 ch 6,	abuseOoh, I'm getting shivers! I forget what happens now...guess I gotta go read!
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2004-08-14 ch 5,	abuseWhee, married! I feel so happy for Squally! And I don't care much for Laguna, he's stupid and selfish!
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2004-08-14 ch 4,	abuseWow! I knew Rinny was pregnant, but it still comes as a big surprise! Good work!
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2004-08-14 ch 3,	abuseHmm...good work! Onto the next chapter!
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2004-08-14 ch 2,	abuseYep, I read this for sure! But still, it gets better and better! Now onto the next chapter!
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2004-08-13 ch 1,	abuseWhee, tension's rising! Gotta go read more!
angel-brokensorrow 2004-07-29 ch 7,	abuseWow...this fic is amazing to say the least. You have such a great, indepth way of writing. We can feel exactly what the characters are feeling, or in Squall's case, what he's thinking. I'm totally in awe right now. ^_^ As I read this I noticed that this fic doesn't have a strong plot, A main one from which the characters act around. More often than not, the fic fails. It becomes...dead I suppose. But the lack of a strong plot made the fic stronger. If that makes any sense. The characters really carried the story and I really just loved how you carried it out. I was so sad near the ending. I felt like crying. Especially because of Adrian. Poor kid... You had a very realistic approach towards Squall's feelings towards Laguna. In fact, I think you're one of the few fics that have everyone chracterized perfectly. Well done!! I'm so going to read the Sequel now!
Queen000 2004-07-02 ch 7,	abusesniff u are so mean. u made me cry! u actually made me cry! this is the very first story to make me cry. u should be very proud of urself, i can't believe u killed off little Adrian. sigh oh well well, great story, and i hope u continue to write. Ciao Queen
Anonymous reader 2002-11-02 ch 7, anon.	abuse10/10, perfect story. This is the first fan-fic that actually made me get sentimental at times. Fine piece of writing. Hope you keep writing more fics like this.
Hecate 2002-08-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseDAMN YOU! I was happy this morning,but then you ONLY went and killed Adrian. You did that to me on purpose didn't you, didn't you!!?? REALLY powerful stuff this, I guess you could use novelisation as a career(...is novelisation a word?)

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