I read this story before, it was a very thrilling read. Okay, so the way I took it was it all happened at the very beginning of the story, right? Chapter One ends where Chapter Nine begins? Anyway, I loved it. Mysteries are always my favourite.

Wendy
Hugs :)

Um.

This was confusing to me... maybe it's because I skimmed around some parts, but I don't know. Eames was very, very emotional -- normally she's so stoic and strong, and I think at first if she was having delusions she would be disoriented and disturbed, not bawling her eyes out.

Your quality of writing was very good, don't get me wrong. You had very good grammar and spelling, etcetera, but I just didn't get your plot. Maybe if you elaborated and cleared up some points it would be a smoother read.

:)

Really good! Added to my favourites list.

Surprising twist, I enjoyed this!!

Hi,

Like your story. very vivid detail, It really sucks me in. This is going on my favorites lis!! Super work!!

thank god she dint die
if she did i duno wat i wood hav done!

nyway great riting and thanx 4 al those long chapters!

kiera - i dont get it - it's prolly b/c even though i'm a brunette i am truely a blonde at heart. could u possible e-mail me and explain it to me? i dont get why goren was crying if she was alive and how eames is still alive?

Great ending! I'm so glad she didn't pick up the wallet for the second time!

A great fic, as always! But when are you going to write a A/B shipper fic?
Congrats! Keep writing! You know I think your work is incredible!

Well I'm glad to hear you haven't REALLY killed Alex. I was miffed when you killed Bobby. I don't like the idea of you killing Alex any better. Just 'cause I'm not a B/A shipper I still think they make great partners.

This story is so good!! Hopefully I've told you that before! I can't wait for chapter 8!!

please don't let alex die she is great. i hope she is okay and what was the significance of her little trip through time, i wonder if eames really is gorens mother( hey anythings possible right)i also wonder what is so important about the poor old man who needs money there is something siniter going on here iam sure of it but don't you dear let alex die or i else i will get mine own back on you at some latter stage. it is a good story but the next chapter needs to be up a lot sooner than the last ones beacuse it is hard to follow the longer one has to wiat to find out the end. post more soon please.

Damn.

I still have NO IDEA what's going to happen here. And I LOVE that. :)

(Randomly...this story reminds me a bit of a pair by one of my favorite (professional) authors--Charles de Lint's "Timeskip" and "Paperjack.")

oh no! poor eames! keep going - keep going! ;-) *g*

Okay! Now you not only hooked me but caught me by surprise! What's going to happen next? Please! I'll be waiting for the next chapter.