Well this fic is pretty good. I wish you would start a new paragraph for each person speaking, though. LIke this:

"HI!" Sirius said.

"HI!" James said.

Instead of:

"HI!" Sirius said. "HI!" James said.

It's less confusing for most people that way.

I'm sure you have a good plotline and all, but it's definitly not cannon for Sirius and James to know each other before Hogwarts--and for Sirius to have a nice family member besides Andromeda? Oh, and Sirius's mother was also a Black. She married within her own family. EW, nasty, I know. But true. If you weren't trying to be cannon, that's great, but if you were, those are just some facts. Sad, but true: I know more about Harry Potter than U.S. History.

I'm not flaming you or anything; if this was a flame, then I would be cursing you and saying that this fic sucked. I would also be insulting your intellect. This is not the case, as you can see. I'm just trying to give you some constructive critisism.

Good luck with writing and with life; I hope something good happens to you!

Well wishes,
Sock Monkey

P.S.-Sorry I'm too lazy to log-in.

i cried at the end! seriously, it smudged my makeup. and i cried even more when i realised you havent posted anything since 2003. its been FOUR YEARS! are we never going to get the sequal? have you abandoned FFC? (in which case, please tell me the name of the site you have relocated to so i can read!) anyway, good luck in whatever you do next.
love Bad fairy

thta was so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so god! i loved it! adored it! it was fantabulous! really funny loved all of remus and sirius' singing...awesom-ness! overall fab! you write really well! ionce again loved every moment of it!

This was an awesome experiance.. I just love this fic- it has made me laugh, gasp, laugh some more, and nearlly drop in a dead faint (I agree with Pete- don't even WANT to know what the Ravenclaws get up to!)
Hey I'm from New Zealand too! Yay Kiwis! (Yay Canterbury Crusaders! {going to gamje tonight to kick some Hurricanes arses around the field!} I'm north of Christchurch- ever heard of Waipara? (its where you turn off to go to Hanmer!))
Anyway, thanks heaps for the story- I'm off to go start another adventure with the boys!
"... off to chase the sunsets.. One of lifes simple joys is Playin' with the Boys.."

This is FUNNY!

Erm hellz yeah go Ravenclaw. ^.^

And I adore the karaoke.

And I was just listening to Happy Together while I was reading this too... Lol.

I LOVED IT!
especially the ending!
and the songs in it were also wonderful :]

good job!

holy eff.
coincidentally (wow big word), i was listening to build me up buttercup while reading this chapter :]

QUEEN!
you put the BEST music in this fic =)
heh i love it

*sobs* My dearest CATHY BLOOM! how much longer must we await the slash? The lovely return of the boys? Your tormenting me my love! I need the slash, and the boys. You are my favoritest writer ever, and I cannot wait for the sequil! PLEASE TRY TO HURRY!! (Seriously, cannot wait for Remus and Sirius to hook up, they're so perfect together... I think even Rowling will admit to that.)

Oh Almighty Cathy-Bloom-sama, *hopeful face* I know that this is pretty late, but do you think you could write another version of the next years, with no Yaoi? It's just kinda hard reading that one of your favorite stories will start having Yaoi, that you know your parents would kill you if you ever tried to read, without their permission. *wails* And I don't know what I'd do if I couldn't keep on reading the story! It's not that I'm against gays/lesbians, (accually I believe that people should fall in love with the soul and not the body) it's just that I have a hard time with any romantic scenes. (movies, books, fictions, fanfictions it's all the same... T.T) Well please take my ideas without any offence, I really don't want to offend you. And if you don't act on my ideas (which, in that case, I won't take offence ^_^;;) I guess I'll just have to skip over the romantic parts and not tell my parents, eh? Please post the next installment/story soon!

A Faithful Reader (who has never reviewed *smacks herself*),

Yami Saki-sama

P.S. I wouldn't call the reviewers Nazis. You never know who you could offend. I have a friend who would kick me hard, REALLY hard, in the shins if I ever called her or someone a Nazi. So if you could please not call people that, me and Saku would both be very happy. Thanks for taking the time to read this VERY VERY long review.

AWESOME WRITE!1 I can't wait to read the next story!

god I love moore

I'm posting something over here because I had a little q: When is your next story coming up?
I read this one over again and I still like it no matter how much I read it!
I would really love to see your next chap/storie up, so... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...?!?!?!?!