Wow...your a brillent writer..and you keep the characters in their original attitudes. Amarant so..well yeah..Freya and Fratly relationship now seems realistic. But I find Amarant X Freya alittle strange..their too bitter towards one another XD (Even in the Game)..But yeah I'll be but this fan fic on favs so I can read what happens next..Freya I turely adore. And you have kept her to her character...great job...^^ Keep up the good work..it's writers like this that make me still be live in fan fiction XDD..yay ^^

~KazeTala

PLEASE CONTINUE! The world needs more Freya x Amarant fics!

~~*ShinakaStar*~~

So...what exactly makes you think Freya and Fratley had sex hundreds of times and were living together in the year before he left?

Yes! Victory to Freya/Fratley!
Feel my pain, Ammy boy!

MORE MORE MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE TELL ME THAT WAS NOT THE END!?

do you plan on making any more chapters i'd really like to know?

this is a wonderful, well-told story. you've hit every character right on the head - perfectly true to the game. i love freya and fratley stories - there's so much potential, no matter how it turns out. and the interaction between freya and amarant is ideal. great telling, so hurry up and write more...

My day was terrible, and then I trawl FF.net to find that you've updated. Oh, *bliss*. As a lover of the original, this chapter is a sight to see - everything has been shaded and recoloured and fleshed. Your Freya and your Amarant are things of pure perfection; so is Fratley, really, all unsteady and unsure. The card game scene makes a lot more sense; racism is still alive and well and kicking in Gaia, what with the old war against Burmecia. Subber. I like it. Oh, this is wonderful - keep on going, do!

Some nice stuff in those chapters. An interesting theory on what happened to Fratley on his journey. I wonder just what Zorn and Thorn did that made Fratley get amnesia.
A few good scenes with the other characters too.
Will Fratley regain his memory with Freya's help? Will Amarant and Freya make up? Update soon!
Plus, are you going to review my story? Please do so.

Oh my god! You have continuedcontinuedcontinuedcontinued. Wah. I just LOVE your fanfiction and I had already given up hope, that there would be a next chapter. Your style is very good and the way you describe the main characters is pretty cool. So please go on with it, it´s one of the coolest Fanfictions I´ve ever read (and I´m sorry, if there should be any grammatical Mistakes or something. Actually I´m german and my english isn´t that good)
lost_dope

excellent chapter...update soon...plz!

A rather amausing chapter here. I love the part where Freya beats Amarant at Tetra master. I laughed at Amarant's comment "Best two of three?". Sore loser.
I wonder what that favour will be?
And please review my fic!

*Claps* Yay, great chapter! I've been waiting for this to update for such a long time! I hope the next chapter comes out soon, along with some Freya/Amarant tidbits? PWEASE?
--Ourania

Congratulations, this is the first decent Final Fantasy fan fiction (try saying that one ten times fast!) I've seen. Ever. I really, really like it and hope you update soon!

Amazing story. I dont know alot about the final fantasy game so your dicriptions helped out quit well. Cant wait to have more time to read more. VixieAngel