Good story

whats going on man? this story is good please finish it.dont be a quiter please.

i hope that you can write the next chapter by this wednsday and that ranma and akane have more stronger passion for each other. ^_^

Nice start to what looks like it should be an interesting story. Thought I'd review one of your Ranma pieces as well as Evangelion... just returning the favour, I guess.
Anyway, like I said, an excellent start. You make good use of description and dialog, though I could go for a bit more description of people. Most of the dialog seems real. The only complaint I have with that is the punctuation - for example: "I Just want to know what . well why you didn't tell me .how you .felt." A simple case for a prereader, or maybe just an extra read through in the QuickEditor.
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Well, there's my two cents for now. I'll keep an eye open for future chapters. Hope this wasn't too harsh... some of my reviews can be, after all. Just trying to help.
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Until the sun sets upon a broken world,
The Shadows

are u planning to end this sometime soon? (or at least not too late)

That was prety good! Where's chapter 2?
Tiney

i realy enjoyed this one... yea i agree with Michael it is very believable... i hope to see chapter 2 soon

This is a very good story! I can see this happening. You get the idea throughout the Ranma 1/2 manga that Ranma and Akane are getting closer right up to the battle wtih Saffron. This is a very believable Ranma+Akane pairing fic.

I really like this fanfic. i wrote a story very simular to this but i like this one better. please write chatper 2. i cant find it if u did. well i really like it and i hope u keep up the good work!

Same story, different words *sigh*

-Joshua

For a Ranma story it's not bad. I'm not much of a Ranma fan... yet... but it's almost enough to make me want to see it.