aside from the fact that you would know a howler when you see one, I couldn't see any other mistakes. I thought this was way cool ^^--it would be so cool if they ever were friends. I can just see Malfoy giving his smirk of a smile to Hermione when she asks about his sore side.

Hey thanks for the review
I don't actually know this song but hey I still thought the story was good..
Sorry for the short review!