Wow. This was -- wow. Very cool and creepy and entirely plausible. Rinoa's voice in the parentheses were great, as was the ending. I really liked the relationship here between Rinoa and Squall, although you didn't really touch on it much (although it was enough to get the message across). And the little bits hinting at things -- her town, stories she had dictated, giving them what they needed. Awesome!

A truly interesting concept, and something I can quite clearly see Rinoa doing, given her personality and the fact that she now has great power. Doesn't seem out of character to me at all (but then, I think Rinoa is Ultimecia, so what do I know?).
Expect a review from me on your German piece soon. Es tut mir Leid, dass ich nur "ziemlich gut" Deutsh kann. Aber, ich werde naturlich versuchen, um zu verstehen und klar zu sein.

Oh, wow. You've wowed me again. What a powerful, unusual piece -- and pulled off so freaking well. A totally cool, very plausible take on the "liberation" of Timber. I especially like the justifications, the little Rinoa quotes, all of them so innocent-seeming and in-character. Great, great stuff. Creepy in a really subtle way.

Whoa. Creepy. Bad Rinoa, Bad.

Great fic! It's refreshing to read something that isn't a fluffy romance or steamy sex scene, and this certainly is not one of those. ^^ But you knew that. I like the way the slow horror creeps up on the reader subtly, and I like the way you described the way things turned out for Rinoa. Absolute power corrupts absolutely, right? Realistic and creepy. Kudos to you!

~ Nem