Ok. First thing on my mind. That scene with Youji... like, the hottest thing to ever leave me wishing for an alternate ending XD I love RanKen though, so I loved this and I loved Keiko-chan _ Much thanks and love,

K-chan

Whoop! I'm the 34th reviewer!

You know, I laughed histerically in the middle because of Keiko. She's so adorable in here!

I loved this story. If I could, I would have put this in my favorites, but...I'm just a Poochie. :3

Anyways, I hope you can do more RanxKen! It's my favorite! *wink whink*

Lovely writing structure, by the way...

ah... one of my favorite ran/ken stories... really liked it...

I loved this and very good details! I also like that girl Keiko-chan!she's so kewl! hehe, I also loved the ending - and did I mention that RanxKen are my favorite pairing? .

the angst, the sap! it combined into ... sapangst! okay, that sounded weird... i love keiko! she's such a cool little girl. D ::applauds another of deena's stories::

Well that was a nicely done fic. Nice character debt -_- it really sucks when I can't even write an one-shot properly. This is nicely detailed and I like that. Nice work and a little heart wrenching too _' I just felt the pain -_-' but really, it's a nice fic.

Now why didn't I read this one? I must be out of my mind. And as always, it's great. I'm running out of compliments, lol. The line with wanting to be a mop was funny. Anyway, very sweet ending. Overall, amazing story. Keep it up!CT

I'm...stunned. That was absolutely brilliant! -

You know, that was the first Weiss Kreuz story I've ever read. I was looking for a good story to start off with and I definitely succeeded. I love soccer players... *Grin*

Anyway, I must tell you that I'm officially in love with this pairing - largely thanks to this fic. I thought they were adorable together before but...*shakes head* I'm absolutely gone now. I'm definitely adding this to my favorites list. )

Trei

*tear sniff* aw so perfect! I loved Keiko-chan she was soo cute!

This is one of my favorite Weiss Kreuz fics ever, I came across it on another site quite a while ago and printed it out (it's still in my drawer.) Then I started reading all your hilarious fics here, and was really surprised that this one was by you. You can really write! More Aya x Ken please! (but I love the way you portray Farfarello too, it's just great.)

Dang! I think I'm gonna cry...Too late. Aw, man! Got tissues? I sure could use one.

This fic was so beautiful. It's very well-written. The emotion you imbue in the fic is incredible and heart-felt. I love how you write.

This was charming, really excessively sweet. I think the aspect I like most about it is the symbolism of the title - how Ken was reading so much into Aya's reaction to his declaration, assuming that meant he hated him and there was no chance for them, when really it was just shock; like the poem that was nothing more than words and not meant to be analyzed. (*bows* My apologies for perhaps being abstruse, but literary analysis is one of my favorite pastimes, and it's so rare to find subjects for it in the fanfiction world) Anyway... I loved Keiko-chan's part in the story too; bringing a child in to help sort out the adults' problems isn't something I've seen done often (err, which isn't saying much, since I'm new to the WK fanfic arena), and I thought it worked remarkably well. Not to mention the fact that she was cute as anything, especially the ice cream trick. Beyond all this, I'd like to note that your phraseology is impressive and eloquent. You really are an amazing author, and I'm developing great respect for you in a very short amount of time. I hope (assume!) you'll hold up under further scrutiny, so I think I'll go read MORE of your stories ; ) Thanks for being so cool.

This was such a sweet fic... so cute! Love this.

God how much I loved this one !

*smile* cool