Wow! This was an engaging mystery. It was weird how the villain seemed like an obvious suspect at first (to me) but was pushed aside in all the action. The trap into which Tai and Davis stepped seems like something from Saw.

Great fic. Well thought-out and planned, detailed, fun to read and has just the right amount of humor to kepp it going just right. In short; I love it! Any chance of a continuation after you finish 'Acts of War' or later? It's a good ending, but might be fun to see what happns after.

A great fic you wrote there. I love the fact that it was long and carefully thought out. You should write a fic focusing on tai and matt, I love the way you write their friendship! :p