Awsome... I like it a lot.

Sorry for not reviewing earlier, I just thought that I wouldn't have anything whorthwhile to say. But I will say this; start Tragedy's Footsteps first simply because Fate's Will would be more effective if the story was completed then you went back and revealed the reasons behind it all.

Good day, Mr. Vinister, so we meet again.

I did not have the pleasure of answering your last review because I've been busy so I'll tackle that last one and your new one right now. As for the last one, who are you to tell me I am a meaningless peon? Just judging by my fanfiction you can decide whether my life has a reason or not? Gee, I wish I could do that too. It's so much easier to judge than to find out what a person is like, isn't it? A weak attribute in one so "superior" such as yourself. As for my friends, I bet that one of them are amounted to two thousand of yours, which I doubt that many you have due to the supreme egotistical, arrogant demeanor you possess. Each of my friends would sacrifice themselves for me or each other because we, unlike you, understand the TRUE meaning of love and friendship between human beings. So mock and sneer if you wish, it makes no difference. You are still nothing but a cold-hearted fool with a large vocabulary. Oh, I shiver in my little 15 year old boots.
As for 'Fade', it was directed towards the Chronicles of Riddick. Indeed the movie lacked many attributes to be called "a good movie" I enjoyed it because of the deeper relationships, the action, and the fact that Vin Diesel is extremely attractive. You can attack that comment all you want but I don't care. It shows that you also are a perfectionist. Well, bad news Vinister; no one is perfect. Especially not arrogant, self-centered, egomaniacal, fools like you who have no respect for other people whether their intellegence is as high (or low) as yours.

Thank you and have a blessed day.

Kyoko

P.S. The song was written by Staind. Enjoy the next chapter.

Good day, dear Vinister. I trust you got my review due to your wonderfully insulting but "constructive" response. I have merely acquired your attention for a, how do you say, rematch. And if you are interested, I would like you to email me.
Actually, I didn't want you to review my stories on here but fictionpress.com. I'm going to remove most of my stories on here and am in the process of rewriting them, so thanks for the inspiring word. *shakes head* You cease to amaze me, man. You are truly a work of art. Never have I encountered such an arrogant, insulting person.
As for your story, I have nothing more to say because it is not worth mentioning.

Good day as well.

Kyoko

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Yum, pocky! ^_^

*looks around* Oh, sorry. That was cute how she gave him his chair, in a giant packaged... ^_~

I think that you should start with "Tragedy's Footsteps," no question.

@.@ Ug, I listened to the Wong sound waves on your site too much and now his voice is stuck in my head... Wait, that's a good thing. ^_^

Ah. You're alive. I thought you had died or something. Oh well! You're alive, and you finished this! Good for you.

Um, as usual, well written and edited well. The characterization was very good too! (I think you're Wong in disguise...Really. You probably are.) You definitely nailed Wong. Sadria grew on me after awhile...It was nice of her to give Wong his chair back (she should've kept it).

Thanks for the regards. But I'm about ready to kill you. Why? Because no one should leave a cliffhanger like that!! Write the sequel, or I shall be forced to send rabid Wong yaoi fangirls over to your home to torture you (Yaoi fangirls are scary).

Anyway, do continue with the after math. Good luck in writing!

--Sagara

Very good epilogue. And I loved how Sadira gave Wong back his old chair and how she kept the dragons. That was cute.

I must admit, you're leaving me in terrible suspense. But, seeing as I left you in suspense with my own story, I won't be holding it against you.

Well, I cannot wait until you decide to put out the sequel. I'll be waiting!

BJL

PS: Oh and Heirs to the Crest might be comin' out soon. Just so you know.

Choberigu! I still can't believe it's the end...*sniff* Nanishiro, great chapters and Wong got his chair back!(It was only a matter of time...) It's really rare to find a fic like this( And I'm not just saying that because Wong's in it!).
And as for what you should work on next... It should be Tradegy's Footsteps. Hope to see it up here soon!
Guddorakku!
~Nakatomi

*laughs* Nice send-off there. *bows* And thanks for the regards.

Now for the review . . .

Brat! How can you stop this part like that??!! *fumes* Not nice to leave Sora dangling like that. She gets hyper and antsy. *grins* My vote would be for Tragedy's Footsteps, obviously.
And I so totally did not expect the Faulkner/Sadira connection. I think I'm confused as to his connection to Wong though. I thought he hated Wong like Mordred does. *shrugs* I probably missed something somewhere.

Anyway, excellence per usual. however, minor detail in that in the beginning of Mordred's section, you start off in present tense. I'd strongly recommend not doing that. It's jarring in its way. But that's all I have. Otherwise, a gem above all others.

Now get crackin' on the third part!

Mata ne!

Sora

@.@ Whoa, Chinese words getting me dizzy... Anyway, I just read this story recently and I really like it. I also enjoy your website. ^_^;

Keep going!

Well, that was a sad chapter indeed. And thankfully you have grace this section with a story that is not full of cilches. I got pretty good idea on what is going to happen next. Welcome back.

::wipes a tear away:: Ah, so sad... but I don't know who to feel more sorry for, Sadira, Wong or Domon for being Mordred's pawn. Heck, even Valdor deserves something for being the sniveling little snake that he is. One of the best chapters yet, in my opinion.

... Ah... Poor Sadira. Poor Wong. Sad. Ah well, can't say I wasn't expecting it. Anywho, this was a good chapter, tear-jerking break up and all. (Okay, so it wasn't exactly tear-jerking but I'm finally out of my sugar rush)

I'm SO glad you updated though! And I hope you update soon again, the next chapter will certainly tie up the lose ends I hope. (Or will you torture me so and not?)

Can't wait. Keep writing!

BJL

Sugoi!! I'm so glad you're back! And such a wonderful piece. But only one more chapter left, did I read that right? Evil little man that you are, you've gone and given me a splendid little cliffhanger.

And Mordred begins to reveal his little . . . evil plan. The pendant, that's what's giving him his little bits of fun, ne? Bastard.

*grins* Anyway, this is wonderful, as always. Can't wait for more.

Wootang