On the part where harry said waiting dumbledore and all that, and abou Severus. You should know

more abou harry potter more first before putting it on a book! Dumbledore died after thy knew Severus was a double spy! Idiot !idiot!

I dont think voldemort would randomly go to hogwarts for seeing James potter so often like a lost puppy. Your indecency on potraying the authors undeniable stunning story of our own depiction ruined it all, it makes me sick you pathetic muggles making all these non worthy fictions, t least a make a fiction make it good you indecent muggle!

Please forthe sake of us all, stop puttin lords name in vain!just put gosh instead! Oh and as for the snogging, it kinda sickens me and I get tired everytime I'm hearig it from sirius and remus and their girlfriends, it too cliche!

U didnt mind changing some parts, but not he deaths of the Potters?D:

School always comes first! ]

Could change the 'God' parts and vulgarity/curse words

Very neat story, just kick out thevperverted parts!

I think that you rock at writing stories.

LOVE IT!

if your starting a new story let me in on it or ill hex u! if i can

IT WAS GOOD

Oddly I'm amazed by this story for many reasons. First, this was writtin before the last book but it is almost as if it wasn't because almost all the people die like in the books. It's really written well and the last chapter had me crying. I doubt you get on this wbsite anymore, but I want to thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Good night James, good night Lily. 3

Are you sure you didn't read book 8? Good story though.I know you enjoy fluff, but some of us like a bit more action. Still a good story though.I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Frank N.Stein

hey, no one dark persay, can apparate in hogwarts grounds so does voldy get in the tower

Again. I like the dreams Lily and James are having and I love the whole story. But, I wish you would have Lily and James go to Dumbledore so they can forget that they get married, have Harry, and most importantly DIE! But besides that I love the book