Oh Snap!

oh
please continue!
great so far
can't wait for next chap

EW! EW! EW EW EW!! THE FRICKIN HECK!? THEYRE GAY?!?!!?! THIS STORY IS MESSED UP DUDE! *pukes*

Continue this story I want to see if they get maried or not.

Wow! Never saw the one coming!! Your good dude!! Now.. just go check your other fics... *Walks away*

~ardelle

Um... hey. I did intend to review this originally and never got around to it, which is why i missed you when i was going around inviting people into Onça's Dreams. i'd love to archive this fic, if you'll let me have it :D
w.freepgs.com/oncas_dreams
Give me a shout on this email and say yay or nay and i'll sort it out. Thanks!

Was estatic to find out it was Shal & Emma. That's what I was hoping for. You should definitely continue this. I would love to see them 'married'. *Goes off to picture Emma as the nagging wife type in a chef's hat*

Hey I'm a little late here but I liked those parts abt Jesse feeling cheated coz he tot tt Emma liked him. Always felt tt Emma doesn't pay enuff attention to Jesse in the show. Haha. But never did I expect it to end as E/S...Oh well...

3 words: beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! I loved it and y'know what. screw all those naggers, Shalimar and Emma rock, o yeah so do you btw!
~DarkStar~

You know what? GO YOU. I always say that it takes immense courage and creativity to write a pairing that the show's writers aren't pushing. They've been put together convincingly as a pair, and I think hearing Shalimar's inner thoughts helps me to connect better to her as a character (I'm not too fond of her, actually).

I do hope you continue, as a marriage between the two would open up all sorts of possibilities.

I knew it! I KNEW IT! :D
Very well done, I must say! A continuance would be cool... having Shalimar and Emma married... wow! hehe!

Hi !!
You should stop your story here ! How could you do an Shalimar / Emma fan fiction !!
I thought it will be Brennan and Emma or maybe Jesse and Emma or eventually Adam and Emma but Shalimar with Emma !!!
Stop ! Please

Nice-it had crossed my mind earlier that it was E/S but as I kept on reading I thought maybe not. Should've trusted my instinct!!!

it has to be Emma/Brennan

I'm thinking and hopeing that it's B/E