Hey you had pretty good starts on this i think it's pretty cool and well keep going it's getting interesting and can't wait to see what happens at their house

Man, they both just need to not be interuppted and have a small chat about what happened in the library. They'll have at least some time to talk at the dinner, right? Hope you'll come back to this story.

That was a great poem. Too bad the bell rang, that sucked but if it didn't it wouldn't leave room for the rest of the story to take place. Great start. Wonder how the dinner is going to go.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

C'mon please?!

ahh so jade updates, was wondering when we gotta clobber you to get an update lol just kidding
anways great work, please update soon

wow wow wow wow wow. Love this one too...incase you're wondering why I have so many reviews of your fics, it's because i'm going down your entire list.

Good story, can't wait to read more!

update fast!

great chapter

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Kawaii! i love it so far ooh Ran loves Tawny, Tawny loves Ren but they dont know that the other loves em ... lol

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I should have reviewed this months ago...I don't know why I didn't. I think this was the very first story I ever read here. It's amazing. You made it very belivable. I wish I could have even just half of your talent. Is Ren going to find out how Tawny feels? Is Louis? I'm currently working on a Ren/Tawny fic, But it could never be as good as this. I hope you update some day!

my guilty pleasure is reading slashes and this one is really good so far. i can't wait to read more...

keep writing!

I love it. Pls continue.

This one too! Write more!