awo the ending was so sad, but you are a great writer

geez!! what a letdown!! i thought you would have more sense than to let this happen!! what a waste of time!! why did i bother reading this fanfic?? cuz i thought the author and story would be awesome...worse story ever!! let me give you a piece of advice...in a story, when the main character's death is revealed, people will get upset!

whats with you putting an underscore ( _ ) ever time your supposed to put an apostrophe ( ' )?
ex:
"But they weren_t at Kaede_s village."
"But they weren't at Kaede's village."
and whats with the "Hicka?!!" at the end? what the heck does that mean?? it sounds like some one choking while hiccuping!! you seriously suck at writing!! if you dont wanna embarass your self, then QUIT!!

i had no idea what you were writing in this chapter!! nothing made any sense at all!! id rate this chapter a 0/5
there was like, no meaning behind what you write, like you just randomly wrote that because you didnt know what to write, which was of course true.
oh yeah, btw dont count this as a review, just something from a very annoyed reader!!

hey stupid, jewl is spelled jewel
are you sure you passed 3rd grade??

WORST ENDING EVER!
WHY HAVE I WASTED MY TIME WITH THIS BS?
BECAUSE I THAUGHT THE AUTHOR WOULD HAVE SENSE TO FORMULATE A BETTER ENDING! I MEAN GEEZ WHAT A LET DOWN!

...T^T T~T
WAH~
this...this is so sad...i almost cried...
YOU ARE MEAN! YOU KILLED HER OFF!!
but its still a good story...not everything can be happy-go-lucky anyways...
oh,and theres this part that might cuase a bit of confusion,' "I have promoises to fulfill."Sessomaru took off into the well,headed west ' into the well,headed west? i dont think you meant to put that( cuz it doesnt make sense) so you might want to revise that, but if you did,oh well.
AND I LOVE THIS STORY!I AM SO GOING TO GO READ YOUR OTHERONES...LOL
and i have no clue if i have told you this,but i have a story on here as well,called Twisted Oppisite,and if you cuold maybe check it out (and review) that wuold be awsome...(and maybe tell ppl about it if you like it?) im going for 10 reviews before i put up another chappie,and so far i have 3...^^;

Hi! lol your story is very good,and im not finished yet,but i thuoght i shuold still review...
^^ i am so hooked to this thing,it awesom-ness.Its funny how she gets away with calling him fluffy...>.<
hey...do you think that you can check out my story? ita called Twisted Oppisite, (also a s/k ) and its actually a diffrent one from the usual s/k fanfic,so ...yeah...
lol :P anyways,this thing is pure awesom-ness,and i love it.!!
-Airpeeps

wow nice story.

OMFG! That was so sad I loved the story but hated the ending...you should really write a sequel
Peace Out

Ooh, this story is interesting! What is going on? When are Kagome and Sesshomaru going to get together!?
*Favorites list!*

~Aangsair~

DX

oh my god, your so evil i was crying during that last chapter!! why did she have to die?!?!? dont get me wrong i love sesshoumaru but, they seemed to perfect!! TTwTT like nothing could go wrong and then she dies!

I HATE THIS STORY!
(FLAMES)I THINK THAT SHE SHOULD NOT HAVE DIED!

AND FLUFFY IS MINE!

-INUGURL25(FLUFFYs GOING TO BE LOVE)(I HOPE)

Do you have to make it so sad?
I love the way you wrote your story, but WRITE A HAPPY ENDING!