 RUserious 2008-06-18 . chapter 23 WORST ENDING EVER!
WHY HAVE I WASTED MY TIME WITH THIS BS?
BECAUSE I THAUGHT THE AUTHOR WOULD HAVE SENSE TO FORMULATE A BETTER ENDING! I MEAN GEEZ WHAT A LET DOWN! |
 airpeeps 2008-05-12 . chapter 23...T^T T~T
WAH~
this...this is so sad...i almost cried...
YOU ARE MEAN! YOU KILLED HER OFF!!
but its still a good story...not everything can be happy-go-lucky anyways...
oh,and theres this part that might cuase a bit of confusion,' "I have promoises to fulfill."Sessomaru took off into the well,headed west ' into the well,headed west? i dont think you meant to put that( cuz it doesnt make sense) so you might want to revise that, but if you did,oh well.
AND I LOVE THIS STORY!I AM SO GOING TO GO READ YOUR OTHERONES...LOL
and i have no clue if i have told you this,but i have a story on here as well,called Twisted Oppisite,and if you cuold maybe check it out (and review) that wuold be awsome...(and maybe tell ppl about it if you like it?) im going for 10 reviews before i put up another chappie,and so far i have 3...^^; |
 airpeeps 2008-05-10 . chapter 11Hi! lol your story is very good,and im not finished yet,but i thuoght i shuold still review...
^^ i am so hooked to this thing,it awesom-ness.Its funny how she gets away with calling him fluffy...>.<
hey...do you think that you can check out my story? ita called Twisted Oppisite, (also a s/k ) and its actually a diffrent one from the usual s/k fanfic,so ...yeah...
lol :P anyways,this thing is pure awesom-ness,and i love it.!!
-Airpeeps |
 Heartless Music 2008-01-22 . chapter 23wow nice story. |
 Fear not the darkness 2007-05-26 . chapter 23OMFG! That was so sad I loved the story but hated the ending...you should really write a sequel
Peace Out |
 HonouTenshi 2006-02-05 . chapter 17Ooh, this story is interesting! What is going on? When are Kagome and Sesshomaru going to get together!?
*Favorites list!*
~Aangsair~ |
 Heart-Of-Ink 2006-01-29 . chapter 22DX |
 Heart-Of-Ink 2006-01-29 . chapter 23oh my god, your so evil i was crying during that last chapter!! why did she have to die?!?!? dont get me wrong i love sesshoumaru but, they seemed to perfect!! TTwTT like nothing could go wrong and then she dies! |
 inugurl25 2005-12-31 . chapter 23 I HATE THIS STORY!
(FLAMES)I THINK THAT SHE SHOULD NOT HAVE DIED!
AND FLUFFY IS MINE!
-INUGURL25(FLUFFYs GOING TO BE LOVE)(I HOPE) |
 Kim 2005-12-02 . chapter 23 Do you have to make it so sad?
I love the way you wrote your story, but WRITE A HAPPY ENDING! |
 BluesDaughter 2005-11-09 . chapter 23 omg...thats so sad ...poor sesshomaru..it was a great story and i liked it alot... |
 HieiLover177 2005-10-03 . chapter 23Aw thats so sad.i wish kagome could have lived. |
 lisa 2005-10-03 . chapter 23 OMG! THATS SO SAD IM ABOUT TO CRY (ALMOST)... I LOVED YOUR STORY BUT THE ENDING IS JUST TOO SAD... (.0_0.) ANYWAYS LOVE YOUR STORY CIAO. |
 Sailor Lucia 2005-09-25 . chapter 23AW That's so sad! |
 Rythym 2005-09-11 . chapter 23All I have to say is that you are evil ending it like that, but you are still a really good writer. *cries brokenheartedly* that is the saddest ending I've ever read. |