I had much the same thought as Drox. I guess it's better to leave us wanting more than to give us too much. I really enjoyed the story. I was just wondering if you could find a way to indicate Tegan's thoughts other than inserting them in parentheses. You should be able to integrate them seamlessly into the prose. Otherwise, excellent job. I hope you write more Doctor Who stories.

Ooooh - that's nice. Kudos to you! Part of me wants it to be longer just 'cause I didn't want it to end, but my more rational side tells me it's perfect the way it is. Short 'n' sweet.

Keep up the good work!