 librarywitch 2009-11-12 . chapter 12I have just finished your series in this AU. Your character development is awesome, plot line well thought out with pretty good depth. I would love to see it finished. Hope you find the time to get back to it. Thanks for sharing. |
 Shiba-san 2008-09-21 . chapter 12I love this stroy! You need to continue it! Please Update! |
 Mommy2 2008-03-06 . chapter 3Wow !! I guess since you haven't updated in 5 years, you won't at all. It's a shame because your stories are great. I love the narration. I don't usually like first person fictions but you and Severus have done a remarkable job.
BTW, small point, Ginny is short for Ginerva, not Virginia. Snape should have known that.
Miss you. |
 Ao yuki 2006-04-05 . chapter 12Come on, three years of resting is still not enough for you?? Please finish this story please? PLEASE?? I would review for every page if you did, and i would also buy your books!! |
 Nienna Telrunya 2005-01-15 . chapter 12*Loud squawk of indignation.* That's it? You just STOPPED and haven't updated in YEARS? Grr.
(Ridiculous is spelled with an 'i.')
Please, please write more. I know it's been a very long time, but *puppy eyes* more is good. *sniffle.*
Excellent job! Please keep writing! |
 Harry-Potter-Fan01 2004-12-27 . chapter 12I like the story its getting weird |
 zafaran 2004-11-20 . chapter 9Oh, very good so far. I've read the entire series this evening and saved them to disk for rereading and making into an ebook so I can reread on my PDA. Any chance of another sequel after Lily leaves Hogwarts when she manages to woo and win Severus? Her seeing him as a mystery to look into instead of someone to be feared is a good start for such an eventual romance. Keep up the good work. Zafaran |
 ,"", 2004-10-18 . chapter 12 I found this story by chance and want to know if it will ever be updated.
Good stories die.
Bad stories go on. |
 jadesfire55 2004-09-08 . chapter 12 Where did the story go? C'mon now, you must finish it. You nail the voices of Remus and Snape better than any fanfic I've ever read. Please, please finish the story! |
 jasmine 2004-09-02 . chapter 12 You said you always finish your stories but you didn't! I want to know what happens but I remember you saying you were done with these characters. Yet you also said you would finish but it has been over a year since you wrote this. Are you going to finish or are you abandoning it? |
 aitvaras 2004-07-30 . chapter 12 ack... how could you stop here!?
lolz... i loved this story.. cool about the charistrega stuff.. wanna see what happens and how it ends! but you haven't updated in about a year =(
would you update, please? it's mean, you know.. leaving us hanging like this.. =)
oh well, on to read the other stories.. lol |
 Dreamer22 2004-05-07 . chapter 12no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no it ended...it's not over but it ended! why did it end? there hasn't been an update since almost a year ago! I think I want to cry! WHY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? I'll give you and Snape 10 cookies each as well as an unlimited supply of alcoholoc beveraves of your choice! if you would finish this! ::gets down on knees and begs for mercy!:: |
 Dreamer22 2004-05-07 . chapter 11FULL CIRCLE
*presses pause on story* I know where the entity went! ::grins:: ok well I think I do at any rate……we will see won’t we…(by the way I think it is Miss. Nelly Fudge… *presses play once again* I just made an interesting connection. *pause* I was thinking about how you made a new trio, just like with Harry, Hermione, and Ron, and I was thinking maybe it’s just a Potter thing…but then I thought that James’ group had four….but thinking about it with the fact that Peter was the weak link, and not always included in everything, and then became a death eater, is similar to the Neville of your story. He was always rather weak and not always included in what the kids in his own year did, ever. And then became a fighter for the dark. I don’t know if this means that there will be someone like that for this story, it very well be Nelly, but she is not in the same year as Lily, Alex, and Nigel are. *ponders* *hits play* *pause* Found a new gryf name, Martha…eh must make any not I can right? Hehe. And God Love Molly Weasley and her never ending sweaters, at least Lily has good colors for hurs, unlike her unfortunate uncle Ron ::giggles:: poor guy, needs better colored sweaters and to be happy, ::crosses fingers in hopes that he eventually finds someone to be with:: *play* *pause* oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no…Damn you Lily for not listing to Severus soon enough, and damn Serverus for not yelling soon enough….ok *play again* *pause* oh Lily….using your new found powers on death eater scum…good girl…hehe…though probably not the best idea ever…sigh…*play* *pause* giggles atg Lily not wanting to tell on the boys who picked on her, definetly didn’t get that from Harry or Ginny, potentially from her name sake though….*play* |
 abraxis 2004-03-25 . chapter 12Since it has been so long since you posted to this, I am probably not going to get my wish that you would continue it. But, forever the optimist, I will ask it anyway.
I have really enjoyed all of your HP stories. I especially like the way you write Severus - my favorite. The 'Go With the Tide' series is my favorite but this one surely deserves finishing. Severus haveing to deal with another generation of Potter and another 'golden trio'is just too good.
I have put you on my favorite list and also on my alert list - just in case. |
 P.L.S 2003-12-04 . chapter 12 Oh my GOD! You are the best at giving the ever peeved potions master a voice. The sad part is it sounds like me when I'm stressed and dealing with those who aren't used to my systems and moods. Oh well, at least he doesn't PMS like I do.
The Chinese Fire Fox is cool, it just fits so well and the serpent being turned into a useful helper is very fitting. Kind of like Snape in a way. I'm looking forward to more of the neo-trio's antics and adventures. They seem like the best group suited to follow in the maurader/golden trio tradtion.
More Snape please! I just love the git and his way with people and Potters. Having him as Lily's protective and shady guardian is great. It really fits with the literary tradition of the unknown uncle who suddenly has to take in the child and the child becomes ultra-curious about him (example- the uncle in 'The Secret Garden'.) But poor Severus... Lily is her father's child, after all.
Avery... discribe him more, please. I like to know more about the bullies and such (that might explain my Malfoy loving.)Oh, did Malfoy have a kid? Maybe a nice Hufflepuff, or to really ** off daddy, a Gryffindor.
Gotta love second generation fics.
Later-
PLS |