interesting... I look forward too reading more^_^ update soon!

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Wow! This is really cool so far! I hope you have the next chapter up really soon. I just have on complaint. Ielan, I think, cries to much. She seems like a really sappy person. But then, that's just me. But I like how you had it so it was Ryou who was her BF! Rivals over a girl. And to think about how many yaoi fic I read that happen between the two of them. Hmm. Anyways, hope the next post is up way soon! Ja!

~Chrono

there a some spelling erorrs in this chapter.
form... change to to from
coarse... change it to course
reread it just incase I missed anything
it's a great story! i'm going on to read the next chapter and I hope to see more after it.

wow cool. thats real good. you could give a better description on Ilene. over all keep writing...well typeing.


MASINKO-HA!!!!!!

never mind my first review. I never read all of your story and so far I like it.

I loved the story. But I think it should be a little longer and end in a different way.
P.S. don't mean to be mean.

I loved the story. But I think it should be a little longer and end in a different way.
P.S. don't mean to be mean.

I think you need to fix some of your errors. Just small little things, nothing big. But besides that, the story is great. I really like Yu-Gi-Oh and reading your fic makes me want to read more. So keep writing.