 UA 2008-11-10 . chapter 33 I really never review to anyone's story, but this has to be one of the best stories I've ever come across in my few years on fanfiction. Truly, you were made to write! Don't stop writing because... well, I'm selfish and I want to read more of your stories. So don't stop!! With love--
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 NekoKags1292 2008-10-26 . chapter 33An awesome story my g very good i loved the plot and i even cried a bit when Kagome died. Me? lily Crying? you have been one of the very ...very few to ever done that and i believe you should feel honored...j/k but seriously you should. Also i would like to thank you for not making the eneding end with her dying, i dont think i could handle it if she died. Anyway another thing i would like to congrulate you on is your writing style. SO awesome the way you told eveything made me feel as if i knew each character pesonall and i could so relate to all of the m in different ways...well except Sesshoumaru...i didn't like him that much in here...but thats only becasue he refused to save Kagome...when his bro asked the first time...other than that it was GREAT! Yeah so now that i have officailly given you a paragraph i will leave by saying UR AN AWESOME WRITER AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE! |
 AsianDelicacy 2008-08-13 . chapter 33This was one amazingly written story. I am a huge Inuyasha fan and I always enjoy reading really good fics about him. In, my opinion this is one of the best stories on this site. It was creative and well written and you just nailed all of the characters personalities. WOW! This was so, so good. So good that I'd read it again. Great job. I wish you much luck with your future endeavors. |
 InuKagomeForever 2008-07-27 . chapter 33WOW! what can I say...throughout that entire story, I felt like I was so far on the edge of my seat that I was about to fall off! I LOVED THAT STORY! Absolutely awesome! The Plot, the description and growing of the characters, the descriptions throughtout the whole story...everything was geniuos! Everything fit together like a puzzle by the end and not one piece was missing! I absolutely LOVED the story!
I loved how it kept me on the edge of my seat and there was not one dull moment throughtout the story. The suspense was perfect and everytime I thought something was gonna happen, it always turned around and caught me off gaurd because something I would never expect would happen and I loved that! There were no mistakes that i saw in the story and I truely loved that!
It was a bittersweet story, but ultimately the end was the SWEETEST thing! It made me happy and giggly! lol I loved the story and it's definitely one of my favs! You did AWESOME and ur an awesome writer! I loved the story! :) |
 Ai'Reika 2008-07-17 . chapter 33Amazing. Absolutely amazing. I can't stop thinking about this. I wish you would write a sequel to this one. And no, I wish you owned Inuyasha then you could make >_> a moviee! |
 eBooeBoo 2008-06-23 . chapter 1 Yay! You're back!! At least you made an update on your profile =3 You know, even though you may *think* you're not a good writer, this story has constantly been circling in my mind for these past four years. FOUR YEARS! I can never forget the most well-written fanfictions, and this one is on my list of fanfics to never forget (and that list scarcely holds that many). Sure, there may be a few stumbles and tweaks in here, but overall this is a magnificent and monumentous piece of work to take on. And you flowed through the plot flawlessly, which is really hard to do for a fanfic of thirty-three chapters.
So thank you for creating such a lovely piece of work! And thank you for coming back to at least make an update on your profile to tell us readers that you're still alive (yay!) |
 beckalyn 2008-06-09 . chapter 33ah. i loved your entire story, great work! |
 beckalyn 2008-06-08 . chapter 9I loved the note writing to each other. Total Inuyasha when he left the other P.S.S. Haha, good work! |
 beckalyn 2008-06-08 . chapter 2Love it so far! =] |
 Kipcha 2008-05-28 . chapter 33Aw! I loved it, too adorable! I loved this story, you're such a good writer! And I really loved the relationship of Inuyasha and Kagome. Too many stories have them saying "I Love You." Three chapters in, and I found it much more realistic like this, and I like it when stories have the character have it so the characters don't just rush into a relationship. I mean, it has been what, 5 chapters now and they still haven't said I love you in the manga, (Mostly because of Naraku, though, I think) so I thought they were very in character. :) I can tell you follow the manga too, just from the colors of everyones eyes. lol, the manga is so much better then the anime, are you still following it?
Anyways, excellent story!
Cheers!
Kipcha |
 yasha's gurl22 2008-01-28 . chapter 33hey i really loved you story,itz too bad theres not gonna be a sequal but oh well,i loved this story anyway :) |
 Spooky Pumpkin 2008-01-21 . chapter 33That was an AWESOME story! I absolutely loved it!! |
 dark vampire mistress 2007-10-23 . chapter 1BASH KIKYO! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! |
 Crystal Twilight 2007-10-06 . chapter 1Hm. So far so good. I like it. |
 azuyama-chan 2007-10-04 . chapter 33a great way to end a great story!
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