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Kairi
2009-10-21 . chapter 33
Wonderful story. :3
XxInume-TakahashixX
2009-09-17 . chapter 33
Ihate when storys make me cry...my eyes getpuffy and red and it hurts trying to llookat the screen while your literally dying to know what will happen next...bu i say that any story that makes ME cry is awesome on its own... i loved it..even if you did make me cry...but hell i did pick an angsty story did i not? anyway loved it and the fact that Kagome was so cool and caring i mean she died twice to help others...is she the Hero or what??

Oh and Inuyasha i kinda liked his character although he mmade my head hurft lol..along with Kikyo...now she was confusing...but i loved how youu made her...she was mean but not...hell she was nice..but not
All in All i Absolutely adored it and i can't wait to read more of your work Keolla!!

Dueces,
HONFreak17

Ps Kags parents sucked a ss lol
Cookie Lover 666
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
This was the first story I ever read on here.
However, whenever I looked for it after I was done reading, I couldn't find it. But I found it today :)

And you're probably wondering what I'm getting.

I just wanted to thank you for such a wonderful story. Reading it, I felt like I was in it. It's been 5 years since I first read it, and every time during these past 5 years that I've gotten on FF I've remembered how much I love it. I can't wait to re-read it for old time's sake :D
snowy-night
2009-01-30 . chapter 32
Happy Birthday Keolla!! ^_^ I remember reading a fic where the author said that her b-day was on Jan 30...

Anyways, I already reviewed before, but I just wanted to review again on your Birthday!! Wow, now you're 20! *I think...*

Love your fic! I also love As You Wish, but I guess you won't be continuing it...

At first, when I read As You Wish, I kept on thinking that the first chapter was EXACTLY like another fic I read (CCS) (and that you know of) but I decided to continue reading... and I love it!

I wish you a great birthday! May all you wishes come true! ^_^

Snowy night
snowy-night
2009-01-27 . chapter 33
Really good! Though Kagome didn't have to waste the wish on the Shikon no Tama. She could have simply stabbed herself elsewhere... and no one would get hurt, except herself and Naruku...
oXHime-ChanXo
2009-01-13 . chapter 7
love the story
BlueTinge
2008-12-08 . chapter 33
I absolutely LOVE how you wrote this story!
Gradually falling into love is the best way to do it.
UA
2008-11-10 . chapter 33
I really never review to anyone's story, but this has to be one of the best stories I've ever come across in my few years on fanfiction. Truly, you were made to write! Don't stop writing because... well, I'm selfish and I want to read more of your stories. So don't stop!! With love--
UA
NekoKags1292
2008-10-26 . chapter 33
An awesome story my g very good i loved the plot and i even cried a bit when Kagome died. Me? lily Crying? you have been one of the very ...very few to ever done that and i believe you should feel honored...j/k but seriously you should. Also i would like to thank you for not making the eneding end with her dying, i dont think i could handle it if she died. Anyway another thing i would like to congrulate you on is your writing style. SO awesome the way you told eveything made me feel as if i knew each character pesonall and i could so relate to all of the m in different ways...well except Sesshoumaru...i didn't like him that much in here...but thats only becasue he refused to save Kagome...when his bro asked the first time...other than that it was GREAT! Yeah so now that i have officailly given you a paragraph i will leave by saying UR AN AWESOME WRITER AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!
AsianDelicacy
2008-08-13 . chapter 33
This was one amazingly written story. I am a huge Inuyasha fan and I always enjoy reading really good fics about him. In, my opinion this is one of the best stories on this site. It was creative and well written and you just nailed all of the characters personalities. WOW! This was so, so good. So good that I'd read it again. Great job. I wish you much luck with your future endeavors.
InuKagomeForever
2008-07-27 . chapter 33
WOW! what can I say...throughout that entire story, I felt like I was so far on the edge of my seat that I was about to fall off! I LOVED THAT STORY! Absolutely awesome! The Plot, the description and growing of the characters, the descriptions throughtout the whole story...everything was geniuos! Everything fit together like a puzzle by the end and not one piece was missing! I absolutely LOVED the story!

I loved how it kept me on the edge of my seat and there was not one dull moment throughtout the story. The suspense was perfect and everytime I thought something was gonna happen, it always turned around and caught me off gaurd because something I would never expect would happen and I loved that! There were no mistakes that i saw in the story and I truely loved that!

It was a bittersweet story, but ultimately the end was the SWEETEST thing! It made me happy and giggly! lol I loved the story and it's definitely one of my favs! You did AWESOME and ur an awesome writer! I loved the story! :)
Ai'Reika
2008-07-17 . chapter 33
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. I can't stop thinking about this. I wish you would write a sequel to this one. And no, I wish you owned Inuyasha then you could make >_> a moviee!
eBooeBoo
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
Yay! You're back!! At least you made an update on your profile =3 You know, even though you may *think* you're not a good writer, this story has constantly been circling in my mind for these past four years. FOUR YEARS! I can never forget the most well-written fanfictions, and this one is on my list of fanfics to never forget (and that list scarcely holds that many). Sure, there may be a few stumbles and tweaks in here, but overall this is a magnificent and monumentous piece of work to take on. And you flowed through the plot flawlessly, which is really hard to do for a fanfic of thirty-three chapters.

So thank you for creating such a lovely piece of work! And thank you for coming back to at least make an update on your profile to tell us readers that you're still alive (yay!)
beckalyn
2008-06-09 . chapter 33
ah. i loved your entire story, great work!
beckalyn
2008-06-08 . chapter 9
I loved the note writing to each other. Total Inuyasha when he left the other P.S.S. Haha, good work!
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