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Richard 2003-08-28 . chapter 1
Night Fears

Thank you for a well written, gripping fan fic. The thought/dream of losing Jane would probably be one of Daria's greatest fears. Definitely nightmare material.
AD 2003-01-28 . chapter 3
great analyzation.
Colline 2003-01-27 . chapter 3
All I can say is wow. You've certainly got more insight into the characters than I do. I was a bit disturbed by Jane's dream, but you're absolutely right about her and Daria and the differences between them.

I would have to say my favorite line was Jane's in Daria's dream. I've used something like that before with my friends.

You might want to have someone beta read your work--you were missing a word in Trent's section. I don't have it right in front of me, but he says something along the lines of "I can take Jane" about two thirds of the way down.

Keep writing! I've enjoyed all your work immensely and I'm thinking about checking out your Ranma stuff too.
BrodySTFU 2003-01-27 . chapter 3
I loved it. It really got to me.
Kalio Halos 2003-01-26 . chapter 3
yay! you wrote daria! its good too!
Roger E. Moore 2003-01-26 . chapter 1
BOOM! We have impact! Nice, small slice of character life. Another short, sharp shock from a new Daria writer. Welcome, welcome, welcome!
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