 Tali-Sarah 2003-09-24 . chapter 1This is hilarious! Do continue soon! There is a shortage of good Xena fic out there at the moment, especially X/A (that is if you make it full of shippery goodness). |
 LadyKate1 2003-02-06 . chapter 1LOL!!!! this looks very interesting. Funny and rather touching... Please continue! But ... may I suggest paying a little more attention to punctuation? You have a lot of missing periods and commas at the end of lines in dialogue. For instance: should be The lack of punctuation sometimes makes it tough to follow the dialogue, which is a shame because you have some good dialogue here. And may I point out one minor spelling error (a pet peeve of mine)? “Now Xena if I had thought this would happen there is no way I would of gone through with it” -- should be "would HAVE gone through with it."
Anyway, I hope you don't mind my pointing out the spelling/punctuation issues! please go on with the story. |
 Dartxni 2003-02-01 . chapter 1 **doubles over laughing** How will she explain it to Eve? Also will you go Subtext or just friends? This sounds really funny. Keep going. |
 BlackDiamond 2003-01-30 . chapter 1 Oh PLease please update this one soon! It's great! I love it and can't wait to read more about it. It seems like it'd be a very long but satisfying story (I HOPE!)
:) |
 Smitty 2003-01-26 . chapter 1 Great story line so far...i love it! Keep it going! |