I love it!

Once again, this was just plain wonderful. You're an amazing writer, and I loved every minute of this. Update soon!

Hey, good story so far. Hope we get to see the little time wanderer or Mewtwo.

I like where your going with this story so far. Why not have like Celebi wander in and run into Pluto? Just an idea.

aw not Ash/Serena Romance? darn i was looking forward to one. hehe well anyway i look forward to reading more.

LP

Hey, though i just read this story. Hope you update this soon. I always did like Pokemon. And SM. _

Rheia

I luv yur story so far! It is very rare when I read Sailor Moon/Pokemon crossovers, but with my favorite, adorable, yellow mouse in it, I couldn't resist! Please continue! C ya later! LOL!

-Bunnychu (Notice where I got the name?)

hm, didnt i just read this... hm, it seems it is in two places _

When are you going to update? This story is fantastic, and I need more!

Yeah, I know I've read most of this before, but it's worth reading a thousand times! I loved it!

Hey, more Pikachu/Serena! They're so cute together!

Okay, that sounded a little wierd, so please take my comment in the most innocent light possible.

Beautifully written. Keep it up!

it's me. AGAIN. please read this! i knnow you must be gettinng upset with my constant ramblings, but i forgot something the other day. if you are not going to update for a while, or are not going to finish the fic, why don't you put up and author's note? it will get moved to the front of the list, and more people will see it! whadda you think? it is also important. your readers will appreciate it very much if you tell them things like this. i'm not ttrying to tell you what to do, just some helpful advice. i'll stop reviewing things like this if you start writing again! i truly do love your writing. it is awesome, with so much detail. have you ever thought of a career in journalism?

please read this the whole way through.

i understand that reviews are very important to an author. but if you get just one good review from a person who likes your story, isn't that enough? if someone likes your writing, you should continue no matter what. it would be not nice to give up if someone wants you to continue. i'm not yelling. but please, do update soon. some people only read certain authors, like off-line. or maybe a sailor moon/pokemon crossover just doesn't seen appealing. but i know you are a great writer. remember, people won't see this fic often- it's on page 28 and will keep moving each day! but please, do update!

please, i'm begginng you! update! i can't wait for the next chappie!

me again. look, i know you may want more reviews. but please, PLEASE update! you have a great writing talent, and i am looking forward very much to your story. thanx!

sugarpony