Sque! Kawaii!
Great idea, good plot, good story... but... the beta in me is itching to get my red pen out. Minor grammatical mistakes. Not so many that it disturbs the reading but enough so that it gets my red pen out.
Love the idea of the happily ever after bit. Can you make just one more chapter? I wanna see how Kagome's friends rect to the "**"... He he he!

I Love your story it is really great. Keep up the good work and keep writing you are really talented. O and would you pweez read my story called 'Why is love so complicated thanks bye now

Really, I think it’s a logical way of Inuyasha and Kagome being together in their real selves. Like the story. Remind me a lot of Highlander I …. *Who Wants To Live Forever* playing in background…. Couldn’t think of any better plot.

awwwwwwwwww....
so cute...
i lurve happy endings!

Your story was awesome! Are you sure its only going to be one chapter? You oughta continue it, it was REALLY good!
~Kirari

i don't usually write a review in my own stories, i hate that !!!
but i want to clear a few things... this is is original (despite it is a fanfic... nothing is original we used someone else's characters) came out of my head, cliche maybe but i consider this idea truly mine, i've never read any inuyasha fanfic before so if you found some similarity to the others' stories, it's purely coincidental. God will struck me with a lighting bolt if i lied....
arigatou

Very good I must say. Although I kinda feel bad about Kagome never seeing anyone again but InuYasha. But it's cool. Wow... centuries for her.... awwww... That's so sweet. Waiting FOREVER... wow... Sugoi! Love the fic! Please make more like it onegai??

I have decided to review. It was good, but original it was not. Sorry. It was still good!