That was good...when he said so be it MY mouth fell open! That was totally not expected...and does it mean that Yami foiled the priest's plan? wasnt he like expecting Yami to save the boy or something?

Anyway...the last chap...was it yugi's point of view but then the 'it would be soon' phrase meant they would meet again soon or was the first bit yuugi's pov and the second yami's pov?

Hn. Didn't like this one. Nothing personal, I just don't think aftr all that talk about how much the Pharaoh liked Yugi, then he just goes and kills him? Nu-uh. But I guess you're the author, so you decide what to do. Plus, I kill characters off all the time (smirks) although not for very long. I find that happens a lot in anime.
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All three: *whispering together in a huddle for a while before all nodding in agreement*

Ani: I speak for all three of us when I ask where the sequel is.

And now, I feel REALLY bad.

...><

If you want...please disregard my previous review...because I'm sure you've already done so, and it's best.

*Sigh * ...Yeah. Kay. Bye. Sorry again for wasting your time, and mine.

(Despite the fact that you may not want to, please read this until the end. I don't want you to get the wrong idea about me.)

(I'm seriously not as bad as I seem at first...)

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Death is overrated?!

That's all the comfort you can give?!

(This...isn't your average flame. In fact, it's not a flame. Just...trust me. Keep reading.)

How callous IS that, anyway? Apologizing for the angst might of helped...but "Death is overrated"?

That's callous to anyone who's ever lost someone dear. That sentence goes beyond fictions. And now I'm ticked.

(No, seriously. Keep reading. Umm...^^;; You'll see.)

Look, I read at least one death fic a week, so I'm not stranger to the concept of poor little Yugi getting murdered.

Despite the fact that Yugi is my favorite anime character...I can still take death angst, and even appreciate it. Not for the morbidness or sorrow, but for its artist way of writing.

But that's just mean.

I hate flaming people. I mean that sincerely. I was all too happy to praise you for this fiction, despite my winces at the rape angst.

But you kill Yugi off in the 2nd chapter and you say that "Death is overrated"?

-_-;; I hate to flame, but in this case, I'm going to make an exception.

(...*Blinks *...I _was_ mad...^^;)

If you do death angst, it's polite to apologize to those with less of a barrier on their emotions...fiction or not.

Oh, and next time, even if it IS angst, please make it longer...and a little happier in the happy parts. It not only eases the blow, but it makes the death more dramatic...

*raises eyebrow * Well, now that's odd.

I'm giving you writing tips and telling you that I would have otherwise loved this fic. I must be the worst flamer in the history of flames.

This isn't a flame...it's a mildly angered complaint. *Chuckles *

somehow I feel better for it being this way. Yeah...cussing people randomly doesn't mean much, now does it?

I bow to your skill, but I just have to say that I do not approve.

*Pauses * *Goes back at reads whimpering part *

Darn. Now I feel bad about writing this. Nu...I must stay mad. Yugi dead. Angst. Yami killed him. ><

...Nerts.

Umm...I'm sure you've noticed that I babble by now.

Ouch. The mad is gone. Officially. *Sighs *
I guess I've been a bit harsh, huh? Umm...sorry.

I just...

*Thinks back * Okay, now I feel really bad. I hope you're happy. First you make me flame you, then you make me feel guilty.

Hikari: -_- Kage, she didn't _make_ you.

Me: Right. Yes. I know. I'm probably ruining my rep as a writer and respected person while looking skitso.

Well, I'll try to sum up how I feel and stop wasting time:

I'm mad because of some things, but can't stay mad, so yeah. Just please change some stuff in the future.

Also, for someone who made me mad, you did a good job. Getting me so worked up is sometimes a great accomplishment...

Finally, despite this whole mess, I want to say that I'm actually a nice person. There are just some things that bug me. Meaning that I shouldn't read angst after such a long and painful day.

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Umm, so...thanks for...writing. -_- *Mutters Japanese under her breath * Good lord, I was writing this as a flame, and yet, I'm thanking you.

See? SEE? I'm pathetically nice. I can't write a good flame to save my life. And now, I'm actually going to say something (Again) you'll almost never hear a flamer say:

I'm sorry.

-_-;; I'm a rotten flamer. But, I'd rather be a rotten flamer that writers laugh at, then a good one that everyone hates.

^^; And no, I'm not crazy (At least, not clincally.), an idiot, or a skitso. I'm just...a very odd person.

So, before I continue babbling like the moron I'm sure you think I am, I'll go.

Respectfully,
Tenshi no Kage

Ps: -_- Oh lord. I signed a "flame" like a business letter. *Starts laughing * I'm hopeless.

You really must think I'm psycho if you actually finish this...*Sigh * Sorry for that too. >

Wow...Great story...Sad ending...
HOW COULD YOU KILL YUGI!WHAT WAS THE PHAROAH THINKING WHEN HE SAiD 'So be it'!

o...o; Whoa. That was... Really good. XD Although I didn't much like the Seto being antagonist thing, he does play it well, ne? x3

That was a very good fic. At the end I was a little shocked, but also very pleased because I'm sick of the really fluffy endings where the villian dies and everything's hunky dory. It's getting old.
This was a very good fic! With a very good ending! Good job!

hahaha...im happy with sappy angsty endings. no problemo~ :) totally fabulous!! KEEP up the FABULOUS stories! Where DO you get your ideas?

*sniffle* That's so mean of Kaiba. ;-; Certainly not a happy ending, at least I don't think so. Well, not *that* happy, I mean...*sqiurms* o_o; Anyways, it is a fantastic story...I like it.

*cry* How could you kill him!?
;_; that was so sad but it was very well done I enjoyed reading it.
No one will read my YGO fic *cry*
o well i'm sure people will at some point.
Anyway i love the fic. it made me cry and i love fics that make me cry. GREAT JOB!

Good! Very sad! ^_^ Me liked!

I realy don't think there are enough fic ending in death. I enjoy the fic more if the character I like best dies in the end. I don't consider it sad at all. What I do find tragic is when they slowly fall into old age. Once they die, everything is all right; they suffer through the world no longer.

poor yugi!

AH !_!

Why?!? Why kill my darlin Yuugi? Well (sniff)
I guess (sniff) it's a pretty good fic otherwise (sob) but...if you make another one...TRY to make it a little (whimper) happier...kay?
^_^ good writting though
I think you should really make another fic. If u do, e - mail me! okies? ^__^