I didn't realize you've been writing fic! This is great - you've really captured their characters well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

THIS PART MADE ME LAUGH!!

"Thank you," Rick interrupted through gritted teeth. "By the way," Rick grabbed the book, flipped it around, and put it back in Jonathan's hands, "you may get more out of it this way."

Update soon, :-)

You have talent, you do know that? you did well, so far so good :-)

"On the trail again, dun dun dun dun dun dun."

And another chapter gone by, and a nother yippy from me. :-)

Hi heidi-o look i am reading it, here i go...

great story, are u going to cont.? it would be a shame not to, cos it's a great story.

I really like your story and would like to ask if u plan to continue writing it.
the last chapter was the best,I loved the Jon giving Evie signals think.:)
hope to read more of the romance and mysterious man.
pls,let me know if u plan on continuing,cross fingers,
liz

It takes a lot to get a sick, coughing girl to giggle, so, Hurray for you! Keep writing.

i'm not signed in, but well done! sorry that i havent followed it :( my comp was broken for a long time...
I adore this! woohoo! I am really liking this story. the characterization is perfect.
Please do get your rear in gear!
lol
toni

OO! FLIRTEH FLIRTEH FLIRTEH!! I am loving this. XD Keep going! Hahahaha. These people crack me up! I love it!

Again, you are awesome at writing Evy! I love her to pieces!

Oo.. dun dun DUN, where is this going?? GASP!!

"held up the scepter in case he needed to use it to beat the living daylights out of a certain American"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA okay, I LOVE that phrase. Love love love! XD

Ooh, y'know what should happen? Rick should propose to Evy with an ancient Egyptian ring that they find in the treasure bags!

If you already had this planned.. ignore me. ^^;

Oo!! The scepter! Clever way to weave that in there! Hehehehe. Jonathan's so funny! I wuv him. XD

WOW! You write Evy so well! I can totally see her saying every one of those lines! You're really good with characterization! =) Awesomeness!