yay! only one chapter one, but it has all my boyfriends in it so far, so i'm already sold!

Update! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

I luv it! Great job!

You managed to combine two of the best movies incredibly well. Your writing is intruiging, & I don't know how you managed to keep track in your head of who you were writing about. A few spelling mistakes, yet otherwise, excellent. Also, I was looking forward to the ending, but now there is none? Perhaps if you are undecided on what happens next, you should write a few short versions of different endings, see which gets the best response, then write it fully, & post it here, so I get to read more of your delightful work!

Wow. This was definitely an interesting premise to a story. You write well. But I gotta say that I wasnt to happy with the ending. Kind of anticlimactic, not to mention unfinished seeming. But, I gotta say that the Obi-Wan option has potential. lol

I'm going with the Obi-Wan theory ;-) CONGRATULATIONS To you for getting this finished (sort of). It's a cool ending. One worthy of all their stuggles.

You finally updated hurray!

Good chappie

OH MY GOSH! (loads gun) LOL ;) The story is over...(sniff) What an awesome story it was! I loved it to pieces! Great job, and thank you for continuing it after so long! ;)

Me like. Will read rest later.

You haven't gotten a review from me before for this story have you?! Well! Here ya go! I loved it! You portrayed Jonathan perfectly! And everyone else! I can't wait to see the next chapter! (Oh...bloody hell...I use too many exclamation marks.) Whoo!
See ya next update!
(*sighs* There I go again...)
I will review more often now! Believe it!
P.S.: ...*looks around*...*whispers*...I loved it.

A perfect Jonathan, what more can I say, but wonderful.

"You should the ones near my home" Made me chuckle.

Inspiration is definately a two-way street, you do the same for me. Thankyou!

claps! Very glad to see more. ai! What an introduction to man-made flight. ;-)

Bloody brilliant! PLEASE! Do continue. I've been waiting forever (well, almost) for more of this tale. I even watched all the Mummy movies the other day. Neat hunh? Like I knew I'd want a refresher for the story.

EXCELLENT CHAPTER! (dances a merry jig) I'm so happy that you posted! Dude, I was thinking to myself LAST NIGHT, 'I wish we could have another chapter of 'Bloodlines'!' WOO HOO! :) When's chapter 21? LOL ;)