This fan fiction was the first one I ever finished and loved! And I still love it, you sure have quite the talent!

I am a story critique and I think this is the most wonderful story evah! I'll add you and your stories to favorite and alert. (My first time to alert author) lol. Make more or I'll scream the squeal of death! Loljk.

kawaii story, keep the good work on.

c ya!

;-)

I can't wait for the next chaptor, but why did only men work on the boat while the women sew the sails? Shouldn't it be based on ability not gender?

I can't wait for the next chaptor, but why did only men work on the boat while the women sew the sails? Shouldn't it be based on ability not gender?

KAwaii! Loved the end Keep writing Hellmaster Fibby! (Love your name 2. lol)

AW! that waz so so so cute! wow! your a great writer. Thnx for checking out my story. I just love yours. Hehe. Well thnx and great job.

This narrative exhibits what a well-thought plot should be: thorough. I'm telling you... a LOT of research have gone into this story. XD Although it is obviously not the greatest work ever seen in ffnet, it is still quite a good read, and hopefully, it could stir other people's imaginations as well. )

aw! thats so cute! im going to cry! actully i am, but its because im watching simon birch (so sad) but this story is still so cute_

I thought it was a good story i loved it. good job.

It's really,really good!I hope you write a sequel!Thanks!

Hey! Don't worry; I believed that you wouldn't kill 'em. It was an interesting epilogue, too. I

really enjoyed reading this story!

kool _ Aww.. such a kawaii and happy ending

this is a GrEaT story! i love it! too bad it had to end...

you really thought of everything, didn't you? particularly the scientific stuff - about the volcano, the island, etc. those who hadn't read this don't know what they're missing.

also, i'm glad that we sort of got to know each other through this fic.

keep writing! )

nice ending... too short though... :)