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Gemma Inkyboots 2004-09-17 . chapter 3
"See what?" Hah. Soundwave being innocent makes me laugh almost as much as Starscream and Megs 1's squabbling...I'm miffed Starscream got left behind, but it was nice while the 'studmuffin' was around. And I loved the hair-pulling. I'm guessing we're off to the Beast Wars next, so please say there'll be plenty of Dinobot! (Bats eyelids hopefully.)
Gemma Inkyboots 2004-09-17 . chapter 2
Ye-es! Starscream! Woo! (dances madly.) I keep getting the Megatronses confused (not knowing who the...umthird one is doesn't help...) but I'm happy now. (Scrabbles off to the next chapter.)
123deadaccount456 2004-06-03 . chapter 3
must see more!
vashgirl 2003-12-02 . chapter 3
*rolls on floor laughing for several minutes*
*gets up and wipes tears from eyes*
I love it. Megatron II reigns supreme! *ahem* Anywho, update soon! Can't wait to see what sorts of chaos pop up in the next chapter!
Alexandra Spar 2003-08-13 . chapter 3
*appears in an Armani suit, sitting on Megatron I's shoulder, smoking a cigarette and holding a briefcase* Er...I'd like to state for the record that my client--*taps the side of his helmet*--is not an idiot, but a megalomaniac. Thank you. *pops back out of existence*

I love this, especially the interaction between Megatrons I and II, although my affiliation has been and will always be with Megatron I. It wasn't his fault he was surrounded with idiots and written to appeal to idiotic schoolchildren in the mid-80s. *sighs like the idiot fangirl she is* In any case, your Mary Sue is...er...even worse than mine, and I put a great deal of time and effort into making Superia Prime as appalling as she could be.
Antlers...heh. The truth hurts.
Metal Gear Prime 2003-08-09 . chapter 3
Now this is comedy! Well written, filled with great characterisations and hilarious to boot, the only problem is that you haven't updated for a while. Please continue!
Beware of Obsessive Fangirling 2003-07-05 . chapter 1
Stupid fanfiction...It won't let me read Chapter 2! I like Chapter 1 though. Antlers. Hehehe. Thank for reviewing my story. Someday I'll get around to posting Chapter 3. Someday. I'm finally getting around to reading some different fics, I'll be sure to check out some of your others. I'll review for Chappies 2 and 3 as soon as FF.N lets me read them.
You know who it is... 2003-05-30 . chapter 3
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FWOOM?

What slagging noise is that?? ;) Had she flushed herself down??

*shudders at the disgusting mental image*

Hehehehe, I liked it!! Do MORE! Or I`ll send a vampire kiwi after you!

"Ouch! Pest!!"

Go Megsy II!

Cya, adn show up to chat whenever you can!


Albe
MJ4 2003-05-17 . chapter 3
Megatron II best, I think not!
Anyway, fics funny, as usual. Megs I and Antlers, well what can you say, dumb as dog s*'t (though whoever decided to find out how dumb that was also needs to be questioned!)]
Keep going, I'm guessing we're going to be in Beast Wars now then?
Talec18415 2003-02-05 . chapter 2
No time to log in =O

Nice continuation XD Continue more! :D
Lynx Traveller 2003-02-03 . chapter 2
hmm, so I guess Havoc'll be taking the reviews now.
excellent....
you do realise that Neffy's made you the focus of all abuse now... she's effectively declared hunting season on you.
of course, it works 'both' ways, the reviewer is no longer immune to custard tarts, being beaten with hallibuts, and 'cho momma' insults.
anyway, tell neffy that this was a great chapter. Poor Starscream, when it comes to pesky MS's he cops it worse than Waspy!
you're welcome on the name, 'tis a good one.
and Meggy G1 is not a fool, WAAAAAA!!!!
ahem. is Meggy III any relation to six-shot??
what I meant about being thourough with killing is have some fun. MS's are immortal, so you have to break their MS-ness 'before' killing them. painfully injuring an innocent and then leaving them that way is a good one; either they end the poor souls misery and kill the innocent themselves, or they walk away and leave them in pain.
alternatively, subjecting them to a Gobots marathon would be sure to destroy their sanity, yessss.
heh, great fic, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!
MJ4 2003-02-02 . chapter 2
Funny, very funny!
G1 Megs a fool?, nah mate, you should pay for that. Megs 2 the best? uh huh... i don't think so.
Other 2 were pointless so u can say wot u want about them!
Any hew keep going, its a laff!
Ashes 2003-02-02 . chapter 2
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh God, this is funny!

It's really making me think though. I'm writing a fic called the "difference in the Mirror" and I kinda afraid people are going to think it's a mary sue, so i'm trying to make the charactor be really tough and a real fighter but with an almost redundent sense of humour. That's pretty anti-Mery Sue, right?
Ashes 2003-02-02 . chapter 2
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh God, this is funny!

It's really making me think though. I'm writing a fic called the "difference in the Mirror" and I kinda afraid people are going to think it's a mary sue, so i'm trying to make the charactor be really tough and a real fighter but with an almost redundent sense of humour. That's pretty anti-Mery Sue, right?
tremor3258 2003-02-02 . chapter 2
Okay, first, the uber-fanboy anal rententivness- The ship under the ocean isn't the Nemesis... that was the ship built in MMTE. The ship they found in the mountains when all the Cons got drunk in Microbots is the ship referred to in BW as the Nemesis.

I think you've got a lot of the Megatron characteristics down... and I like the Seekers general unease with what's going on... And any time Megs II beats on someone, you know it's justified.... ^_^

Technical notes. The slight shiftings in voice were well-handled, and I don't see any spelling problems.
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