I love the triangle your setting up but i hope its jasmine and leif in the end!

i love this pz continue though i rather like lief and jasmine pairing i'm not to fond of ranesh

oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

great

wonderful

loved it

write a new chap soon

Aw! huggles to you too mate! _, ermm...OK! stop guilt tripping me! i SWEAR! i'll update soon! i have just been tired! _ but i'll update for you,
anywayz! great chapter! JASMINE! NOO! she is either really affected by Lief's cooties, or is sick! either one will work!
i still love the style, and i am easily draw into your story...people over msn are annoyed cause i didn;y answer them while i read your fic!
i could just picture that! was awsome! update soon! and i will try to sit down on my lazy butt to write. ja ne!

hay thanx i love ur story so much i cant wait to read the next chpt hope u will contiue for ages thanx

Good chapter. Really good. Update soon really soon.

Uh-oh! By the looks of it, Jasmine is heading 4 a love triangle! Lol. Ranesh... Lief... Hmm, is this a Lief and Jasmine fic or Ranesh and Jasmine? Plz update soon and i promise 2 review 4 every chappie u make after this. E-mail me when u do update and i'll be here ASAP! _ L8RZ!

oh
did that just happen?
oh ha! did they just do that?
was lief about to catch them?
aw...i really liked lief and jasmine to be together...oh well you are the author genius... i am only the faithful reader who can't wait to read the rest of it! so don't take so long in updating...ok?

Didn't Ranesh go to be with The girl that starts with M?

Chibi_Chichan: BOO! I don't like Ranesh already and I don't know who the heck he is! - Everyone hates him!
Jasmine: Not everyone hates him.
Chibi_Chichan: Down with the idiot Ranesh!
Jasmine: -_-; No comment.
Lief: Why am I the weirdo in the story doing odd things when people are sleeping?
Chibi_Chichan: And why am a hater when I don't that guy? Actually I don't really mind Ranesh it is just that I like j/l fics. Now Lief I want you to say something for me...)
Lief: What? Oh no! I'm not saying it!
Chibi_Chichan: SAY IT! Or I'll squeeze you to death! )
Lief: She wants you to update quick! Please don't let her kill me!
Chibi_Chichan: - Yay! happy now! *hugs Lief and squeezes him too tight*
Lief: *choke* I'm choking to death help!
Chibi_Chichan: Please update soon or I will kill Lief! not!

No No No! You cant have ranesh and jasmine, you just cant! jasmine and lief belong together! by the way...does anyone know how to say his name properly?

Most of the people here who write 'DQ' fanfic are ...sorry to say this...crap. But your story is rather interesting and enjoyable to read. Please continue!

nice story. i like the way ranesh likes Jasmine. i just think there are too many l/j stories and not enough ones where jasmine falls in love with someone else./ I am currintly working on a fan fiction where she falls in love with dain, so i like the way you think. Keep writing!

hurry up girl
plz plz plz update

kol
i like these pairings keep updating