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supersaiyaman 2008-05-26 ch 5, anon.	abusewosnt piccolo going to make a wish on the dragonballs that evryone would forget about him. so why does he want to disapere.if the wish is sucsessfull there will be no memory of him ever being on earth and he will be trapped forever.
supersaiyaman 2008-05-26 ch 4, anon.	abusei like the story so far will he go threw with his paln to make evryone forget him.if iwere in his shjoes i would fraze my wish.i wish for evryone that dont care about me to forget about me.
supersaiyaman 2008-05-26 ch 2, anon.	abusewill gohan ever forgive him .
storm-of-insanity 2005-11-19 ch 8,	abuseAW that was so sweet. the ending. it was beautiful. i mean when piccolo told gohand to leave and never return i was litterlally screaming NO YOU CAN'T DO THAT but then when he tells gohan taht he's going to meditate i felt so happy :D man that sounded corny. this is a great follow on. it's AWSOME
Raptured Night 2004-10-11 ch 7,	abuseCuddles Piccolo Poor poor Piccolo I'll make the hurt go away. Heh anyway good job your writing is incredible as always. You are an inspiration t fanfiction writers everywhere and my favorite writer on Keep writing I look forward to another fic filled with piccolo/angst goodness!
Cyndi 2003-06-23 ch 8,	abuseAh another good one. Piccolo's misery always makes me want to cry! It makes me want to smack ChiChi and them for being so mean to him when he's obviously in pain. :(.
Luna 2003-05-12 ch 8, anon.	abuseI forget if I reviewed this story, so if I'm doing it again, oh well. I love it! Please write more, I'd really love to know what happens next! ^_^
Luna 2003-02-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseHI! I think I reviewed one of your fics before, but I'm not sure. oh well! I've been meaning to review, but I just kept forgetting. Vegeta: ::cough:: lazy ::cough:: Luna: Be quiet! I just wanted to say how much I love your fic(s, and to tell you to keep writing!
Muzura 2003-02-24 ch 8, anon.	abusei loved this story its so well writen (im jelous) this acctualy made me cry, first time in um 3 years? ya thats about right (not easy to make me cry huh?) =^_^= great story ~muzura
shitsumon 2003-02-22 ch 8,	abuseBeautiful. Just beautiful. I found much of the story (both original and alternate ending) to be depressing--but in a good way. You kept a very tight reign on rampaging plot bunnies (no going off on random tangents) and maintained an excellent plot. I will definitely have to recommend this story to anyone who wants a serious fanfic on DBZ, Gohan and Piccolo in particular I hope you will continue either endings (preferably both) on through the Android Saga. Shitsumon
Aura Starfire 2003-02-21 ch 8, anon.	abuseYay! I love this fanfic, it's very good grins nice work :-D
Never-Rebel 2003-02-20 ch 8,	abuseOh, Moose-y, you're grammar was perfect in this chapter. I didn't spot a thing wrong when I was readin' it. And I'm feeling much happier now seeing this happy ending. It was so kind of you to fix everything. XD Happy ending! Very nice. ^_^ ~Toreina-Mei
XZanayu 2003-02-19 ch 8,	abuseI love the way the story ended!! It was truly wonderful and I think you should continue!
Dreamwraith 2003-02-19 ch 8,	abuseOf course I enjoyed the story! And of course I would like to see more! If you're really busy, though, I don't think the public would really mind if you finished your work first. We can wait. Anyway, it was a good story. I felt so bad for Piccolo. I keep trying to imagine how hard it is going to be for him to "reconnect" with everyone else. I'll be waiting for your next story!
Sawnya 2003-02-19 ch 8,	abuseAmazing, truly amazing! So Piccolo and Gohan made up--sort of, or at least they're on their way to doing so. I do hope they find happiness. I'd hate for Piccolo to wind up alone, poor guy. I have enjoyed this very much, and it tugged at my heartstrings. Will there be a sequel?

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