 Sally1 2003-03-09 . chapter 4Weddings are always kind of fun! |
 A 2003-03-08 . chapter 4 I simply love the mistery and intregue. I am glad that Stve & jaden are getting married now
I am anxious to read what follows. I hope we don't want long. |
 C 2003-02-25 . chapter 1 It's a great start to a good story. Lots of
mistery, romance and a lovelylady for Steve. it's
been a long long time since you've last posted How you plan on updating soon.
I am anxious to learn how and who hurt Jaden
and how her knight in shinning armour protects her. More soon please? |
 Becca 2003-02-23 . chapter 2 Hey
cool story pls post more soon !! |
 adsh 2003-02-23 . chapter 1 skimmed the story.I believe you mean IAD (internal affairs department/ the cops that police the cops!!) not IAB ? anyway..not enough Jesse for me.if any future chapters deal with Jesse I might give it a read. |
 A 2003-02-20 . chapter 1 This is a good story. Hopeing you'll consider updating it really really soon. Been almost
a month since you've posted. |
 A. 2003-02-04 . chapter 2 I love what you have done with the story and where you've taken it. Can you pleae consider
updating soon. I am anxious to see what happens to Jaden & Steve next. Thanks, |
 A. 2003-02-04 . chapter 2 Also a wonderful Chapter. I agree with Sally about Mark's reply to the car IIt blew up" I love the romantic side you are writing between
Jaden & STeve and his love and concern for her
Please post again soon.......... |
 Sally1 2003-01-29 . chapter 2I loved Mark's reply when he was asked what happened - "Car blew up!" It just seemed like something he would say. |
 A 2003-01-26 . chapter 1 A wpmderfi; start to this story. I hope that we don't wait to long for more to come. Please post
soon. |
 Sally1 2003-01-26 . chapter 1It's an interesting beginning and I look forward to reading more of the story. |