 ghostninja85 2004-04-30 . chapter 5Not much to say about Exile 3. I liked it though. Lian always is a nice icebreaker. And I liked how Tim decided to make some tough decisions soon. |
 Coral Skipper 2003-02-07 . chapter 5I love this story. A bit of advice instead of using ninja throwing stars, use the term shuriken. Thats the proper term, and it is also more broad encompasing small japanese throwing knives also. |
 zelda 2003-02-06 . chapter 5 i can't wait for the next part |
 mic 2003-02-04 . chapter 5 The last chapter already!?!? I just wanted to keep on reading and reading...it was so good, just like all your other fics!
Roy was cool, Lian was cute, and oh my, the supercycle... the supercycle was adorable! It still remembers Timmy! Awww.
Good luck on all your tests, papers and projects...professors are really evil beings, aren't they?
Looking forward to the sequel! |
 mic 2003-02-04 . chapter 5 The last chapter already!?!? I just wanted to keep on reading and reading...it was so good, just like all your other fics!
Roy was cool, Lian was cute, and oh my, the supercycle... the supercycle was adorable! It still remembers Timmy! Awww.
Good luck on all your tests, papers and projects...professors are really evil beings, aren't they?
Looking forward to the sequel! |
 Fusion Blaster 2003-02-03 . chapter 5Well that was quite good. Just wish I didn't have to wait WEEKS for a new chapter or story for that matter. I just can't wait for the next one. Well here's to you man. |
 Crash 2003-02-03 . chapter 4 Interesting. Really like the first meeting with Young Justice. And Lain... Sounds like she's getting the Batgirl II treatment. Trained from birth...
Seriously though, I think this series has turned me into a Spoiler fan. And since I've never read a single comic with her in it, that's pretty impressive. 'How?' I hear you cry. 'She was portrayed as petty and unlikable.' Precisely. Slap-in-the-face treatments of side characters kinda gets to me, and I end up liking the mistreated character purely out of spite. I'm sure the real Spoiler isn't as noble as Tim or Nightwing, but that interpretation really stretched belief. |
 arsenal13 2003-02-03 . chapter 5I knew that the man in black was probably Roy. Didn't surprise me any. But it was still a great chapter. I can't wait for Exile 4. |
 zelda 2003-02-02 . chapter 4 eww i can't wait for more |
 arsenal13 2003-02-02 . chapter 4I like how Lian is good with throwing the knife it seems like a good idea. It shows that Roy probably taught her. Perfect aim and all. I can't wait to find out wh othe man in black is although I have a guess on who it is. |
 mic 2003-02-01 . chapter 4 You and your damn cliffhangers...LOL. Lian is still adorable. Nothing much going on in this chapter, but reading it from Tim's perspective makes it interesting. I love how you showed his loyality to his friends, and the interaction between Lian and him is so cute! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
 Ghost in the Machine 2003-02-01 . chapter 4You know... It might just be Roy has changed costumes again. But I doubt it. |
 Fusion Blaster 2003-02-01 . chapter 4I guess Daddy's home. This should be interesting. |
 mic 2003-01-30 . chapter 3 Awww! Lian is adorable! Very curious what Tim's new superhero identity will be...Thank you so much for yet another wonderful chapter. I'll be looking forward to the next one! |
 mic 2003-01-30 . chapter 2 Oh my god, I loved this chapter! Very nice characterization...you pulled this off better than I could've imagined!
I especially loved:
"Kon about broke my ribs with a hug, and then realized what he was doing and put me down hurriedly, backing off a couple of feet. "
This was perfect. It made me laugh...this is exactly what Kon would do!
Thanks for another lovely chapter! |