ehh...'twas short..and needs a bit of fine tuning but I can't complain..this is the ONLY Kaldea/Sion-ish fic out there...don't people see that Kaldea and Sion belong together Dominique won't DIE!! She's a freak a' nature!! Gaah..sorry..myah! ^.^
Yuki V.

yep! it's definetely a good story! i love that game, "the bouncer" it's kool and, sion is soo hot and dominique is soo pretty, they make a great couple, plz plz write more, i wanna read more of it! and don't make sion's last love be with him k, i like sion and dominique 2 gether, but u can do wat u want :)

Not bad for a REALLY short story of 5 paragraphs. I liked how you put the emotion into it, but don't you think you should've wrote more? Like I said 5 paragraphs isn't a stroy let alone chapter, but I enjoyed it!! Kaldea is one of my favorite chracters!

*--*SSJ4 Lulu*--*

This is good Kaldea is my fav charecter!

It was short, like you said, but you got a real feel of emotion to it. The far off wanting, pain, and love from Kaldea Orchid, and the jealous heatred for Dominique. Very good fanfic of Bouncer. I would like it to be exspanded to a ch. or two. Maybe have Sion's or Ms. D's point of view
too.