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| OzzyTheGnome 2005-10-05 ch 7,  | abuselol! |
| OzzyTheGnome 2005-10-05 ch 3, | abuseupdate soon plz this is the best story ive ecver read and ive read about 326. |
| nightbug08 2005-05-13 ch 7, | abuseI'm not going to burn you for the ultralisk it was fun! |
| nightbug08 2005-05-13 ch 6, | abuseyou did that with a plot? I like the zergling though he's cute! squee! |
| naziblood69 2005-05-04 ch 7, | abusethat was a great fan fic! i read em all and i really want u to finish it! oh, and dont get sued!peace :)! |
| nightbug08 2004-12-26 ch 7, anon. | abusethat was the best thing i've read for months |
| Reaping Sword 2004-07-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseNick is a mary sue. Change him before it becomes irreversable |
| Zeratul001 2004-07-06 ch 7, anon. | abusenice story so far... make more chapters! pweaze cuz I really liked this fanfic and I want to see what happens to every one |
| me 2003-12-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseI agree u r like a teddy bear, a teddy bear that i want, and that i need, and that i want to hold and cuddle with!! hehehehehe oh yeah and i liked the story i did notice a few spelling mistakes, there were so many character names it got me kinds confused, but other than that it was pretty cool |
| duorden 2003-10-29 ch 7, anon. | abuseGood job. i like where this story is going. keep it up! |
| Book-Master 2003-05-04 ch 7, | abuseIt reminds you of Teddy Roseavelt!? o.O? Geez... Ok, fine, whatever. I juse hope I can do some mroe of my own writing before more of my ideas are taken! En Taro Adun -Book-Master |
| Book-Master 2003-05-04 ch 6, | abuseEh, FINE! I'll go along with the little Zergling thingy too. -Book-Master |
| Book-Master 2003-05-04 ch 5, | abuseDidn't make to much sence... but it's ok. -Book-Master |
| Book-Master 2003-05-04 ch 4, | abuseOk, it's ok still. But come on... *Sigh* Why is it no one understands about Starcraft other then me and Starcraftman these days? Oh, well, while these various psy weapons are completley unuseable with Psi, I'll go along with it. And humans are incapable of Psi. Humans cna only access Psychic ability, not Psionic abilitys. Anyway, keep writing. -Book-Master |
| Book-Master 2003-05-04 ch 3, | abuseIt's getting interesting, but you have some rather onorthadox things in it. After all, a Protoss would probally tlak mroe like some strict monk. And, if you really wanted to make it intereting, you would've had Nick dieing of the Hybrids poison, and then the protoss save him, but the poison will allways be in his blood(Kind of like the Scorpian King you know) Anyway, yuo cna probally change that later. If you ver need advice or help, don't hesitate to talk to me. -Book-Master |