why did you post a story which is just a part of the serie?
i even think in this case, cause you're making it public, you should normally pay copyrights

Nice little fic! I think it's exactly what's going through Ios' head at that time.

I think you could make a whole series of those POV fics.

nicely done. loved it. big fan of devil&devil actually except that fanfiction seems so rare. anyway. good job. liked it very much.

lol ^^ awesome work

Finally, a fellow D&D lover! Thankyou for writing about it, so hard to find decent D&D fics these days...

Hello from another DD fan. So nice to see fics for that manga - they're not easy to find!

I really did like some of Ios's introspection during this - his thoughts on how being human is making him (and Sword) more human. I also like how you touched on some of the insecurities we see in Ios in the manga as well.

Just in case you didn't know, there *is* a Devil & Devil section on It might be an easier way to get this story out to more DD fans (not that there are that many of us, sadly...) Anyway, just a suggestion. I hope you decide to write more DD fic in the future!

~MM~