 Megan McGory 2003-01-26 . chapter 1Mike, you know how much I want to kill you for this review, right? :-p If you haven't read the story yet don't read the other review because he gave away the ending. Well, we tried to fix it. I'm not one to "review" my own stories, but this warranted a note from me because he gave away the end. |
 GodReaver 2003-01-26 . chapter 1I liked the story a lot...despite the typical "happily every after" ending. The story kept me interested and wanting to read more, so that was a good thing. But after James found Jesse, the story was pretty much all over with. Yeah he kissed her and yeah there were moments of love and stuff but the story pretty much ended after they were walking back to camp together. Despite that and the actual ending, I thought it was very well written and moving. If you are the kind of person who likes fairy-tale endings then this is a good read. |