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| snoopykid2991 2007-03-02 ch 1,  | abusehey you should consider contuing this. great job |
| Heroine of the Valley 2004-09-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty cool! I think Ryoko and Yosho would've been better togethr. I mean, that thing of brothers and sisters marrying...even if that was the custom in Jurai that just doesn't seem right, does it? Maybe they just didn't have enough life on the planet so siblings HAD to marry or something. Drunk Ayeka...funny! She doesn't seem like the type. |
| Pazzie 2004-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThe only thing that bothered me was the kiss... other then that it was beautiful ^^ |
| aquafina rain 2003-02-26 ch 1, | abuseo.o' Ara, Jade-chan! That was wonderful! ^^ A great fic for my mood! I loved it! It had just the right emotions for me to actually re-read it. o.o' Anywho.^^ I really liked this! woohe. *adds into favorites* |
| Relaxing Pikachu 2003-02-01 ch 1, | abuseFinally! FF.net works for me! For some odd reason, I was never able to leave a review neither yesterday nor earlier today, even though I read it offline the day you put this fic up. Bravo! I never would've thought of that pair up, Yosho x Ryoko. Very emotional and the characterization was great and definitely in-character. I liked that other side of Ryoko and the explanation as for why she pretty much became "bad," I guess you could say. I really liked that other side of Ryoko you showed when back on Jurai. Poor Ryoko and her past. :-( Either way, this was well-written, and I'm sorry I wasn't able to review this sooner. ^_^ |
| nakasoi 2003-01-27 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! that was a great story...are there any more chaps? |
| UNgoddess 2003-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWell, I must say, I wasn't expecting that. It was good, though, very good. It was certainly a very different twist on the story. Though I can't imagine Ryoko and "Grandfather," I think that she and Yosho would have made a very handsome couple. The explanation for Ryoko's creation was very feasible and it could fit well into the story, explaining a bit more of the hatred between Ryoko and Ayeka. 'Til later. |