Don't know if you check this site anymore? But this story made me smile. :)

Amazing. I love it.

i like this, and part of it reminds me of a buffy episode

XANDER: Think of the happy. If we don't find what we're looking for, we face an apocalypse.

SPIKE: Really? You're not just saying that?

Beautiful.

This is wonderful. Utterly. I haven't read anything dramione for a long long time and this reminded me exactly why I shipped their random-pairingness so enthusiastically before. Much love. This has just about everything I ever loved about DMHG. The format was brilliant too, and I loved how you (well, I) just kept waiting for the happy ending to be revealed in which they sort it out and skip off into the sunset but it doesn't come; just before, before, before until you're right back at the beginning and wondering how they even got as far as they did. And in a way I think that made the fic, that it's left hanging without you even realising it's left hanging. Their relationship ends up seeming like such an achievement despite the fact she's just about to leave him.

A few fav bits:

"And then she’d be going off to her Brilliant Future (as everyone said), and he’d be going off to join up with the rest of his friends in Terrorizing the Wizarding World and Crushing the Muggle Hordes Beneath His Iron Boot. (also as everyone said, although this time in lower voices)." Just... yeah, I liked it. Lots.

"She called him every name she could think of and some that she got from very old books about very nasty people". (I wish I could do that.) Well put and very Hermione :)

"“Draco?” Hermione said coldly, and watched the laughter drain away from his face like someone had pulled the plug." The unspoken rule being broken was fun. Marking a progression in their relationship at the same time as, well, just being cute and funny.

"Draco nodded sagely. “We have those too,” he said. “Well, they’re not so much fan club meetings as just club meetings. You know, planning ways and means to get Potter alone and hit him with clubs.”
That was not funny, Hermione thought. Except that it really, really was."
-I agree. I cackled. It wasn't funny, but it really, REALLY was. >.<

And just generally "evil and wistful" Draco with "that sideways smile that made him look slightly sinister and totally irresistible." Ah, so much love!

/Damn/, this is amazing. *hearts for eyes* My favorite bit was their conversation about clubs.

what happened to "now"? i kind of did not get it, but i liked the flashbacks. great job on 'em. :)

on second thought, i think i get it. it's written backwards, isn't it? interesting invention.

For the second time in 15 minutes: I love it!

This is so interesing how you made the story go backwards! It is so cool!! This is also amazingly well-written! Great Job!!

I found this fic on Argosy's rec list, and it's lovely! You should cross-post this in Dramione so others can read it! :D

Are you purposly trying to make me fall in love with your writing? It's a dirty trick, you know.

But it's working.

Ooh I adored this, really adored it. I saw it reced on a friends journal and as I hadn't heard of it before and because of the praise she had for it, I had to read it myself. I loved the style you wrte it in, the way it backtracked, was utterly intriging and addictive and very unique. And the dialogue was fantastic. This was so intense and slightly bittersweet, because by the time you realised how they had come to be together, you also knew that it was slightly doomed. Very bittersweet, I seem to have read a lot of peices like that today. But seriously, this was brilliant, and really deserves more notiriety.

huh?what was that about??
i am very confused...
you're story is lets sa"unusual".

Wosh! Just Lovely! Really! I love their witty interaction and you depict them so well with the dialogues. Yes, the dialogues are the best! Great fic! ^_^

Wow, this was a hell of a one shot. Surfed on in from a rec, and I just loved it. The dialogue was superb and the story was very well structured.

Great work