 Mealoaf 2008-03-08 . chapter 2 That was fun =) Although I thought the ending was a bit abrupt... but that's ok. |
 satomika 2007-11-14 . chapter 2HAHAHAHAHA!
this fic is so adorably funny...
please continue this fic... |
 MJ 2006-12-04 . chapter 2 Pleaz update soon, it´s very good! |
 Shenhui 2006-04-30 . chapter 2Hoe..nice story.. where's the other chapters? waah... this is so frustrating...leaving a nice story...do update soon onegai...
Ja. |
 itachi-sama a.k.a cathrun 2006-03-30 . chapter 2WAH! UPLOAD SOON! |
 Paradoxos 2006-01-27 . chapter 2GOD STORY! |
 windy-goddess 2005-09-04 . chapter 1hehe...i love ur story.can u plz update it. i would love to know what happened next.plz update |
 m0m0 the cheese 2004-07-02 . chapter 2 o.o dude, i still hope ur thinkin bout continuing this fic. >.>;; cuz im in dire need of sum tofuu fics here. and this one sounds very very good, since the charactersd dont sound 2 ooc, and it has an interesting plot. o.o i wanna c wat happens next. please update when u have the time. ty |
 oreH 2004-05-04 . chapter 2 wahahahaha! this is so funny! i was laughing the whole time. i like your humor! =) i liked the dove effect! wahahahahahaha! pls continue writing with the next chapters |
 xyted 2004-05-03 . chapter 1OH PLEASE UPDATE! sounds very interesting!! |
 Asphodel Oakburt 2004-03-19 . chapter 2Oh no, no, no, Lafine...I'm not disappointed by the chapter, no. The chapter NEVER disappoints a reader if the story is good...
it's the CHAPTER THAT'S NOT THERE that disappoints us!! :( wah!
nice story... ;p |
 Mikagami Amaya 2003-10-27 . chapter 2 if this is all to your story then it sucks. please add more chapters! UPDATE! |
 akina nakamori 2003-09-01 . chapter 2hey there! The story's nice!^^ still wondering what would happen though...hehe...anyway, update soon okay? im really excited to know what's gonna happen...Im feeling all giddy right now...well,just keepup the humor and the good work okay?^^ Ja Ne!
~*~Cat~*~ |
 YiNgFa-FuIsO 2003-07-13 . chapter 2 Hey! Can you pls. finish the story! Well, I Like the story you know! I hope you finish it!
Pls...do read my fanfic. It's entitled "Can you love me?" I'm counting on you!
YiNgFa-FuIsO |
 UPDATE! 2003-07-06 . chapter 2 UPDATE! Man, I have been waiting for thsi to update, ya know? |