That was fun =) Although I thought the ending was a bit abrupt... but that's ok.

HAHAHAHAHA!
this fic is so adorably funny...
please continue this fic...

Pleaz update soon, it´s very good!

Hoe..nice story.. where's the other chapters? waah... this is so frustrating...leaving a nice story...do update soon onegai...
Ja.

WAH! UPLOAD SOON!

GOD STORY!

hehe...i love ur story.can u plz update it. i would love to know what happened next.plz update

o.o dude, i still hope ur thinkin bout continuing this fic. >.>;; cuz im in dire need of sum tofuu fics here. and this one sounds very very good, since the charactersd dont sound 2 ooc, and it has an interesting plot. o.o i wanna c wat happens next. please update when u have the time. ty

wahahahaha! this is so funny! i was laughing the whole time. i like your humor! =) i liked the dove effect! wahahahahahaha! pls continue writing with the next chapters

OH PLEASE UPDATE! sounds very interesting!!

Oh no, no, no, Lafine...I'm not disappointed by the chapter, no. The chapter NEVER disappoints a reader if the story is good...
it's the CHAPTER THAT'S NOT THERE that disappoints us!! :( wah!
nice story... ;p

if this is all to your story then it sucks. please add more chapters! UPDATE!

hey there! The story's nice!^^ still wondering what would happen though...hehe...anyway, update soon okay? im really excited to know what's gonna happen...Im feeling all giddy right now...well,just keepup the humor and the good work okay?^^ Ja Ne!

~*~Cat~*~

Hey! Can you pls. finish the story! Well, I Like the story you know! I hope you finish it!

Pls...do read my fanfic. It's entitled "Can you love me?" I'm counting on you!

YiNgFa-FuIsO

UPDATE! Man, I have been waiting for thsi to update, ya know?