Not bad, not bad. Few gramatical mistakes, otherwise not bad.

O0;;

this story was so random...XD cute, but too random. i had to reread the part wen the CHU started (--;;) n then the part where echizen nanjiroh was like "mada mada dane" caz i was like...wat the heck? he's spying on ryoma? where is he!? Oo

but i likd the CHUs overall...too cute! but not the middle part...too OOC in my opinion

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Oh my god! this is very very very VERY silly! lol.. it's so wierd! lol.. but very nice loved it^^ lol can't stop laughing! where di u ever get that idea! lol very cute^^

O_o... _> ok...

You are crazy! Hahahaha... you made them all look so stupid! The ending is not so good though... but overall... like it!

hahahaha!!
that's so funny!!

HOW RANDOM! LOL! I wuv Kiku asking Oishi fer his! Nyan!

This is really good! Great humor and everything. I love every part of your fic.

God bless,
Carlita

*ROTFLMAO* >DDD Love this!!!!! *collapses into laughter all over again* You must write more "silly" fics like this! We all need a good laugh once in a while. :)

Hum...I liked the beginning, but not the end.

::falls on the ground laughing::

*Squealz loudly in between laughs* Kyaaaaaa~!!! >v!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!! *shakes with laughter* I love this story very much! Aaaah, especially when Tezuka kissed Fuji ... ^^ They're so sweet ... I like this so much, keep on writing ne! I'd always read your story! This world needs more Tezuka x Fuji!! And Momo x Ryoma! Oishi x Eiji! Inui x Kaido! ^_______________^

So, err, poor Taka, he's alone ... ^^;

Please keep on writing!

^^ *squeals* They all squeaked? lol ^^ So cute!!! My my... Tezuka smirking naughtily? Hmm.... this is putting evil images in my mind.... ^________^