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| Koala Tangerine 2003-07-16 ch 22, anon. | abuseI love this story! It's been fun to read, and really interesting. Keep up the good work. KT |
| bri 2003-07-16 ch 22, anon. | abusegreat story please hurry up and update so that i will be able to read the rest of this amasing story that was writen so well ~smirkes at her hiperness~ so keep up the good work and i look forward to the excellent writen chapters soon to come! That better be plural |
| goldstranger 2003-07-16 ch 22,  | abuseSuspense builder! *points at author* Nice with the fights, i love the face of you have with Mac and Gabriel. the uktimate brother sister fight! |
| Jill 2003-07-16 ch 22, anon. | abuseIts great! I love how you keep continuing. Maybe you could spice up Jesse's role? Hurry up the next part! ~Jill~ |
| Fiery Feral 2003-06-15 ch 21, anon. | abuseMORE! MORE! MORE! Soon please! =D |
| tom 2003-05-28 ch 20, anon. | abusekeep going... |
| goldstranger 2003-05-26 ch 20, | abusetrust me when I say you're not hte only one who didn't understand the speech in the Matrix. I understood most of it, but it was stll abit confusing. I like the fight scene here, yah did good, considering the inspiration. The fact that they got caught was not suprising considering who they got caught by. Now, being that Gabriel is partly a psionic (as well as feral, and I think molecular) I think it's safe to say he has the telekenisses. But i'm not too sure either so you might wanna check up on that. |
| ace9 2003-05-25 ch 20, | abuseanother good chapter! i love reading your story cause you have Gabrial. No one really talks about him anymore. hell, i liked the guy i was mad they killed him off :{ More? |
| Redhead 2003-05-25 ch 20, anon. | abuseNo, don't stop there. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| somebody 2003-05-25 ch 20, anon. | abuseUh oh...they is in trouble. Keep going! It's really good! |
| Fiery Feral 2003-05-21 ch 19, anon. | abuseWow! Really good story! I like it. Keep going! =D |
| Tom, 2003-05-20 ch 19, anon. | abuseKeep it up! Loads of action in the next chapter |
| Redhead 2003-05-20 ch 19, anon. | abuseThis was a good chapter. Sometimes there needs to be that part of the story which fills in information, explaining the past or preparing the future. Yours has only one chapter. A certain movie series I know of, did it with an entire sequel leading to the next one.(which isn't even out yet) Keep going. I'm sure the next chapter will be very exciting. |
| wizard13 2003-05-19 ch 19, anon. | abuseI seriously want to know what happens next! Please update soon! =) |
| Redhead 2003-05-11 ch 18, anon. | abuseHey, this is good. I can't wait to read the realization of their relationship. Please keep going and good luck on the exams. |