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crazomatic 1/31/03 . chapter 1
Hey Auto Brat Oppie!

Cute fic, wonder what's going to happen next with Thirteen in the Ark. A little Decepticon can go wild in there! Oh yeah? Whose his uncle? Will we find out in the next chapter?

Oh, the word you are looking for is "which", not "witch" (it's a common typo) a "witch" is the haggard old women who flies around on a broom.

Cute story! Hope you got more coming soon!
crazomatic 1/31/03 . chapter 1
Hey Auto Brat Oppie!

Cute fic, wonder what's going to happen next with Thirteen in the Ark. A little Decepticon can go wild in there! Oh yeah? Whose his uncle? Will we find out in the next chapter?

Oh, the word you are looking for is "which", not "witch" (it's a common typo) a "witch" is the haggard old women who flies around on a broom.

Cute story! Hope you got more coming soon!
Duel Mistress K 1/29/03 . chapter 1
This is great! XD I don't know much about G1 or 2 but I get the idea. Continue!

PS. Go Thirteen!
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