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| Sanity's Epitaph 2004-10-06 ch 1, | abuseLol! *Collapse* It's So FUNNY! Ha ha hah hah! oh... yeah, this is good. This is good. I like your writing style, especially how you portrayed the characters personalities. |
| Sarumarine 2003-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was incredibly funky, but it was pretty funny at times. I like Eagle's line "Not the Goggles!". I thought Grit was portrayed rather unfairly, unless you didn't like him. And I guess that's understandable. |