this was a nice fan fiction

Ah, the nostalgia of reading this! I bet you didn't expect more reviews, huh? Well, here I am, reviewing, and almost crying because of the nostalgia of fics about the first game. Wow! Beautiful! I love it! So, you have written this fic a long time ago and don't expect more reviews? Well, I guess if you're reading this it was a surprise so... anyway, I always scan the end of each fanfic section for a good read, cause at the first bit, you actually have to be a good author. Then, the standard gets lower and lower, so ANYWAY! good story is what my rambling is saying. BYEBYE! SEEYA!

I like it. It gives you a good view of Keira.

I always enjoy seeing someone not bashing Keira. (I've never understood why so many people hate her.) There were a few misspellings, like "strait" instead of "straight," but this was still a good take on Keira's perspective.

Wow! A Jak and dax story that actually makes sense! (No offense to any other authors that write J&D fics)

hiya. I got your muse.::holds up the muse holding it tightly by the tail:: Good story. hope to read more of your work::rubs head::well thhats if I ever finish reading all the Jak and Daxter Stories.
Ja Ne
Jak's Gal a.k.a. Shan

Yay! More Jak & Daxter fic! ::does happy-dance-of-joy:: And good J&D fic too! Nice Keira perspective, I like it very much. =^_^=

Ahh! I loved it! You definitely got me to say "more work from you!" :D *waves*

*bows*
Phoe-chan