 LittleMissTake 2004-10-28 . chapter 1aw, that's so sad. ginny can't dump neville! what is she, thick? harry's probably gonna explode at the end of seventh year, so why go out with him? stupid girl! was the voice just hnim or was it myrtle or the squid or sumat? |
 MyOwnLittleWorld 2004-06-06 . chapter 1*Sniff* That is so sad... and so good. The ending was the perfect touch; I could almost see this happening if it fit into Canon... My poor Neville. )o: |
 Merfy 2004-06-06 . chapter 1This was really well written and I liked the balance--Ginny wasn't portrayed as completely shallow, Harry wasn't a prat and Neville wasn't a martyr figure (what I mean is, one gets the impression that he is sad, but *will* move on). Good job. |
 Andromeda Black 2003-12-09 . chapter 1 AW That's so sad.
THat Ginny is a heartbreaker.In one story she broke up with Harry for Neville and in another she broke up with Neville for Harry.
I feel really sorry for Nevile. He's such a sweetie and really doesn't deserve that.
TTFN
Ta Ta For Now |
 untamed shrew 2003-11-09 . chapter 1 aw...that is so sweet and sad, Neville is one of my favorite characters, he's a sweetheart and Ginny just broke him down...;-; *gives Neville a warm hug* I think you are good at this, found your fanfiction site, will check out more, if you want the idea I have an angsty idea for a sequel sorta...Harry gets Ginny pregnant and leaves her...who is there for her? just an idea thought you might wanna know great job once again |
 hasapi 2003-02-20 . chapter 1Oh, that was a very touching ficlet! Almost no one pays any attention to Neville anymore. I think it might be because of his clumsiness; no one can really see him with a girl, I guess. Its actually rather sad.
This is a very, very awesome little story. It's one of those things that just . hurts. *sniff* Good job though. |
 SnapeJuice 2003-01-30 . chapter 1Okay, okay, okay, I said your fics are like heroin in a previous review. I changed my mind about that - let's try Pixie Stick dust this time, because this has officially become one of my favorite one shot fics! (It's going on my difficult-to-get-onto Favorites list.) It is so rare to have something written from Neville's POV - and when the poor kid couldn't even skip rocks properly, my heart just went OUT to him.
And I love that last line of the fic. Excellent. Two thumbs up. (And if I had fifteen more thumbs, they'd go up too.) |
 Colleen and Fish (the fish) 2003-01-27 . chapter 1 Aww...poor Nevillebaby. He always seems to have the worst luck.
I'm hoping that'll change in the next book. I heard rumors that someone's going to discover they had powers they never knew they had. (Although even if he did, I'm sure he'd still be horrible at potions^_^heh)
July's so far away! |
 Iselin 2003-01-27 . chapter 1 This was wonderfully written! I loved it- it was so unique. It's not often that someone writes through Neville's point of view, and it made this story very cool. It was an awesome thing to read! :) |