wow! this is really good! i'm normally not that keen on m/m stories, but this does it nicely!

This is very, very good.

Wow. This story is amazing. Your descriptions, the alliterations and assonances, the first-person almost chain of thought... It's brilliant.

Cherry - I really like what you did with this story!!! The memories of Taipei and your use for the 'ice' works well when connected to Will, the future, the past, his pain, his life... everything. It has a nice flow to it. Very well done m'dear! :)

I've said it before and I'll say it again - I love your use of imagery. Your word choice also rocks. Yay for Cherryfic. :)