Just a little bit too mushy, but not a bad start! On to the next chapter! ^_^

I liked it but Remus mentions Severus at the end, When does he tell Harry he's with Sev?
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not bad.

awesome! i love chicken...i kinao of like beer too,but don't tell anyone,lol.Amazing story!

since you asked i didn't like how you started out with harry being family to siris bc that just got me in the wrong mind set but i liked to story anyways.. I did bc umm I gotta think of a good reason.. Well, it had a GREAT ending!
Anyway.. Loved the story!

The END? What about the sex!?

Oh, Harry! You little minx!

Aww, so cute! So fluffy, and adorable, kind of cute! This was my first story of Harry/Sirius(only because I haven't read to many HP fics, heh) and you made a fine example for me! :D
Thanks much. You're writing was pretty good, except for the days that you said you were tired, and worked alot. I could clearly tell you were tired... or good at making up excuses for sloppy days. ;)

Oh. That was... abrupt. was just getting into the swing, getting all excited about how it would go and.. if finished all easy and quick.
Hmm. A little disspointing.

But EVERYTHING before now was fantastic. Easy, slow lead-up, yummy Harry... :) Great!

i must say that remus is being very liberal about this thing, I mean harry's sixteen! Good story, you had some sentences that really kicked **. I want to hear the Remus/snape story though. It sounded promising.

This was a fantastic story! I loved it. Now I'm going to go see what else you've written . . .

This is good but it feels unfinished.

Hilarious ending of chapter.

Yay!
Nicely done, very sweet and touching.

no good sex?