wonderful!

Ouch. Painful, painful conversation. Sadly, if these two had such a relationship, I could see it ending this way.

Powerful and sad. Great writing, as usual. *throws flowers and coins*

I get exactly what you're saying, just sometimes things just can't work out right!
Did the challenge myself, and I love that T.S Elliot quote you put in it! (He's one of my faves ^_^)

Awww *snuffle* I've just read someone else's response to this challenge that was the complete opposite to this, and now I'm all sad :( I can really imagine him just sitting int front of the fire, and brooding. *sigh* Incidentally, you've included my favourite poem ever, so I'm happy(ish) now :)

Angsty and emotionally charged. Well Done!

Oh, very beautiful little story! :) Poor Sev!...
I've got one for this challenge too, actually it's a sh**, but, anyway...
Congratulations!

pip-pip!!!

Well done!!!

Not bad. Well done for only 100 words. Me like. By the way, personally I'd put 'This is the way the world ends' three times like it actually is. So it would be 'This is the way the world ends, This is the way the world ends, This is the way the world ends, Not with a bang but a wimper.' I admit that the only reason I know this is because I've watched The Stand by Stephan King, and read the book too, and he has it in there. But, anyways, great for 100 words.