 Z 2005-12-26 . chapter 1 I don't get it! Why didn't they consummate the wedding? They're not technically married if they don't have sex and it's weird that she doesn't even think anything of it. I can imagine why he might want to let her ease into it if she's really young (not sure of her age--maybe i skipped that part) or really REALLY innocent, but it seems odd to have it go months. People would talk to her, ask her how it was and that sort of thing probably, and wouldn't she feel more embarrassed at NOT being intimate with her husband at some point? Doesn't she worry that maybe he's not attracted to her, or that he thinks she's a child, or that she's not good enough, or that's he's GAY? Because that would be what would go through my mind! lol. I'll read the rest of it to see. ^_~ |
 Duchessa Ashley 2005-01-02 . chapter 4O... this is such a cute story. I really do love it. Heero and Relena are definitely meant for each other and this story told as such. Awesome job. I just loved it! |
 Xardion 2004-12-15 . chapter 4Though I agree that a lemon would have pushed this off the charts, it is still excellent in all it entirty. Really great, top-notch work. I love it! ^_^ |
 JenJenGundamFan 2003-06-28 . chapter 4Oh my gosh! I new I read this story and I thought I reviewed but I remembered that I printed it out and read it at school! hehehe did I do that *blushes* anyways this was a very very very good story! I loved it! and Heero was so sweet! through this whole fic. I loved it! hehehe. I love this fic so much! its so cute and I love how its like the past but in our time! that was so awsome!
Take care!
bye bye!
Jenjengundamfan ^.~ |
 km lowe 2003-05-10 . chapter 4 kabayan! SUPERB job! awesome! double kudos! i LOVE it! xD to the point of this fic being one of my favorites! |
 km lowe 2003-05-10 . chapter 3 aw... how cute! xD I lub that kissing scene! how progressive^_~ |
 Sissi 2003-04-26 . chapter 4Aw, this was story was so lovely...I loved it!!
When Relena woke up and heard Heero telling her that it wouldn't work out, you really gave me a huge shock. Fortunately, Heero wasn't talking about the failuire of their relationship, just that he couldn't live without her ^^. It was extremely sweet.
And, I loved the idea of the seed you have introduced in this story. Creative and meaningful, fitting perfectly to this story.
I loved this fic, have I already told you this? Lol. Anyway, thanks for sharing this loevly piece of work. Maybe you will have time to work on your other fic, perhaps "Darkness and Dawn"? ^_^
Sissi |
 *Sexy Vixen* 2003-03-30 . chapter 4 aw that was sweet I thought it was KAWAI 'n'SUGOI. |
 sexy vixen 2003-03-23 . chapter 3 tha't mesed up i can understand not seing eachother naked NO SEX but no kis on the lips shesh i could nnot do that i mean it's heero yuy for god's sake tat sexyu piece of anime man.luv this cchap UPDATE SON. |
 Cinpii 2003-03-23 . chapter 3What the hell? You stop there? I'm about to smack you Neesah, you're so mean. Damn, you make us wait _forever_, and then you stop there. You make us all giddy to see that a new chappie has been posted, and then you depress the heck out of us by saying that 1)The fic is almost over, and 2) You cut it short on purpose. *sobs* Just when it was getting really, _really_ good, you stopped. Girl, you need to be smacked!
Technically, I'd say that this chappie was written better, but I still love ch. 2 the most, because of all the emotion I felt when I read it. I say finsh the last and final part (though part of me is crying because I thought that this fic would last a lot longer then the paltry 4 chappies you seem to have planned), clean up the grammatical errors, and go enter the fanfiction contest at blissfulignorance.com. The deadline's in May, so you have time. I seriously think that this fic could be a major contender.
As for my comments on chapter 3, I'm glad Rellie wasn't raped, because I really wouldn't be able to stomach that. But the bit about Heero kissing her on the cheek, and her returning it and getting his lips instead, that was so sweet and cute and innocent I loved it. You put them in a situation where they grow to love and depend on each other, and yet neither is willing to take that first step to make their relationship into something more. All that prolonging was an excellent ingredient for a 1xR fic, and I applaud you.
I'm sad that this fic is going to conclude, but I look forward to any other story ideas you may have centering on 1xR. Until your next posting (unless you wait so long, I email your lazy butt to get you cracking, ^^), ja! |
 sexy vixen 2003-03-23 . chapter 2 i luv it is god but wheres tha heero/relena moments? |
 sexy vixen 2003-03-23 . chapter 1 oh i luv it so kawai. |
 Parachute 2003-03-22 . chapter 3Wow... such a good fic... Please tell me you are going to update this soon...
I love the style that you've written this story in... |
 Feather Qwill 2003-03-21 . chapter 3OOh! Tension! YAY! |
 absent one 2003-03-21 . chapter 3Aww. So there's one more chaper? I'm absolutely loving the almost-fluff :D |