Reviews for Contemplations of Birth

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nicholasluvr 2008-06-27 ch 13,	abusegr...i told my brother he could have the computer after i finished this story, and now I find out that it has a sequal...
jean jelly bean 2008-02-12 ch 16,	abuseWhat a wonderful story! I love reading it and I can't wait to see what plot twists you have in store for them! I hope you'll update soon :)
AMI MIZUNO1 2007-11-15 ch 16,	abuselol. love it. update soon!
Heath321 2007-05-16 ch 16,	abuseLove it! But hurry with your next chapter
pstibbons 2007-04-02 ch 16,	abuse"Have a good summer, Harry, Draco. Don’t do anything I wouldn’t do!" The naughty grin on her face made Harry laugh out loud and call after her, "Does that mean I can take a stab at your husband since he’s firmly in the ‘would do’ category?" Nice line. Took me ages to get the pun, stupid me. Brilliant fic.
pstibbons 2007-04-01 ch 9,	abuseHarry simply looked at Hermione. She drew her wand at the same time he drew his. "Incendio." They spoke in perfect synchronization. An incredible chapter - it's always nice to see Harry and Hermione working together like Fred and George. Hermione displaying maturity is hardly surprising, but Harry doing so definitely is. I would have chosen the option to save the scrolls - and I would have been wrong.
pstibbons 2007-04-01 ch 8,	abuseLol at the alternative breakfast activities.
pstibbons 2007-04-01 ch 7,	abuseCool. No offense Severus, but I am a Gryffindor for a reason. I'm smart enough for Ravenclaw and I work hard enough for Hufflepuff. It should not surprise anyone that I can plot like a Slytherin. But I lack the ambition of your house. I just want to read and work through my equations. And save the world on my down time along with Harry and Ron I loved that quote. I agree with its sentiments. editable -> edible (honestly!)
pstibbons 2007-04-01 ch 6,	abuseNice.
pstibbons 2007-04-01 ch 4,	abuseThat was brilliant. I even added a quote from it to my collection of fics recced on my portkey profile. (Snape's voice got quieter when... I'll make sure he behaves reasonably well for a manic-depressive psychotic with delusions of grandeur.") Bisexual Harry is cool. Besides, all humans are bisexual, only the degree varies.
pstibbons 2007-04-01 ch 3,	abuseThat was a ** good conversation between Snape and Mione.
mekareami 2007-03-01 ch 16,	abuseGreat story. For a while there I thought that Sirus was going to be a problem, but I am glad you wrote in a solution. Thank you for writing and I look forward to reading the sequel
sbrande 2007-01-20 ch 16, anon.	abuseOh well done indeed... I really loved this story with it's plot twists. It really made me think which is something that rarely happens in the world of HG/SS anymore. Cheers, Sonia
E 2006-08-23 ch 16, anon.	abuseI liked the premise of the story, but I have to say, in parts, it was very, very confusing. The history of the houses I felt was never really explained too well and Soren's bid for power was a bit confusing. Also, the idea of Hermione going to Malfoy Manor wearing poison-coated lipstick "just in case" was a little farfetched. For that, I wasn't able to suspend my disbelief. I don't think that she would ever expect to kiss Soren to death. The thought of her bringing poison is believable, all things considered, but poison in her lipstick? I don't believe it. Also, reading your story would have been a more enjoyable experience if the beta-ing were done better. Many words were misspelled, often numerous times. Malfoy manor was often referred to as "Malfoy Manner" in the beginning of the story and Lucius wanted to "woe" Hermione, instead of woo her - just a few examples. Everyone "shuttered" instead of shuddering when Hermione was going to transform for the first time. These spelling mistakes made it very hard to appreciate the rest of the story. Overall, a decent story.
jax319 2005-11-24 ch 3,	abuseoh i like this its so words cant describe

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