Loved it, um in away it was different then some other stories I had read, but I just really like how some chapters were HILARIOUS, while others were tear jerkers, anyways I loved it and cannot wait to read the sequal...good job.

i enjoyed reading this. i don't normally read HG/SS, but i decided to try it since the sequal was under LM/HP and that was the paring i was looking for. and i don't like reading a story unless i read all of the stories before it as well. i doubt i will continue reading HG/SS pairing but this story was good.

oh my god the spelling error! So distracting!
spellcheck doesn't work with homonyms!
fair story, though. Nice plot.

Loved it! I'm heading over to read the sequel right now!

loved the story!

I'm completely enthralled and so excited that there's a sequel. I should sleep before I continue, but...

Just all round lovely story line. For some reason it just grabs me. Well done.
~M

Love it! Freaking love it! You keep the characters so true! Talent!

I Will Ttly Be Checking Out Both! I Have Been Reading This Story Over The Past Four Dayz. I Wanna Finish it. And Let Me Say That I have Enjoyed Every Emotion This Your Writing Has Given Me.

YYWKMN.

that was so good.

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gr...i told my brother he could have the computer after i finished this story, and now I find out that it has a sequal...

What a wonderful story! I love reading it and I can't wait to see what plot twists you have in store for them! I hope you'll update soon :)

lol. love it. update soon!