many people say that tenchi is not going to live very long because he is only one 8th Jurian but I think that is nonsense especialy because that is mostly a matter of Juria power and if thier is one thing tenchi has it's Juria power

I was really hooing this would be a T/A pairing, you already had three kisses between them! But you kept Tenchi disinterested to the end, right? Anyway, the story was enjoyable, you had me on the edge of my seat with all the twists.

I would be interested in any future Tenchi stories you write, hopefully they will be T/A hm? :P

Cool

that was an awesome story but you finished it kind of abrubtly

ok, i'm sure you've got a review about exactly what dono is, but I'm too lazy to look XD
basically it is -san but is used in more of a business situation, or at least that is the way that I've had it described to me.
the translation provided in the JWPce dictionary (freeware; PC compatible only) is
(pol) person, Mister (mostly in addressing someone on an envelope), Mr., (P)

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Third review try... Hopefully the site isn't experiencing overload this time. *growl*

Anyway, this was a good ending to a great story; I wasn't disappointed at all.

But... (you knew there was going to be one, right?)

This last chapter seemed a bit, um, disjointed; like it was rushed somehow. I can't really put my finger on why though, it just seems that way to me. Still, did I mention that it was good regardless?

I look forward to more stories by you in the near future.

Wow. Very good story. I really liked it alot, mainly because you go into a good bit of detail, without going overboard. I hope any other stories you write are just as good as this one.

Thanks for writing one of my favorite fanfics,

CAMintmier

Very cute! Congratulations on completing this series! ^_^

plz update!1

this makes vwry little sense

I think Nagi's last comment summed it up nicely. ^_~ Seriously though, this is a great series, and I'm eager to see how it ends!

Great story so far. I have to say that the reappearence of Shoji was something of a surprise. It remains to be seen if he really is as evil as he seems but anyone who'd do the things he did to Mihoshi deserves to die slowly and in great agony.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Cool surprises and an evil cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

Your writing is good, and it's clear that you have sympathy for all of the characters. Keep up the good work!